Natures Imperfections

It's not perfection in things if it exists
that means so much to me
but natures imperfections and beauty
like the ruggedness twisted bows
of a sprawling tree.

The unevenness of a mountain view 
lush green sweeping  valley's
buttercups kissed by morning dew
Ricky silver ribboned winding streams
the power of an angry raging storm 
a single red poppy
growing among a waving field
of ripening barley corn.

A temperamental ocean
the crashing waves upon the rocks
A flock of raucous calling seagulls
hovering over the fishing boats dock.

Beauty on everything around in that I see
For natures imperfections
created by Gods hand
are perfection to me.




Peter Dome.copyright.2013.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013



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Date: 12/30/2013 1:58:00 PM
I agree with your sentiments. What a lovely verse. I enjoyed reading and keep up the excellent work. I like your avatar. : ) Always, Laura
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Date: 12/30/2013 2:28:00 PM
Thank you so much Laura, I really appreciate your kind words. it means a lot to me. look forward to reading more if your excellent work. take good care. best wishes. Pete.
Date: 12/30/2013 8:15:00 AM
Very deep and inspirational write, Peter
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Date: 12/30/2013 1:23:00 PM
Thank you so much Doctor Ram.much appreciated .Hope you are keeping well take good care. best wishes. Pete.
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