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Nature Trip With Spiritual Treat

God
nature
masterpiece!

   Praise*
   faith-drive
   mountain peak!

      Thanks
      freedom
      cave’s welcome!

         Bliss
         triumph
         waterfalls!

            Trees
            blessings
            heaven’s gifts!

*Psalm 21:13 Be thou exalted, LORD, in thine own strength: so will we sing and praise thy power.

September 14, 2018
Haiku of 3-2-1 syllables
2nd Place, "Haiku 1-2-3 or 3-2-1" Poetry Contest
Sponsored by Charles Messina; judged on 10/9/2018.

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Date: 10/10/2018 8:26:00 PM
Great string of inspirational Haiku, Beata, congratulations on your win. <3
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Date: 10/9/2018 5:04:00 PM
I love these Beata! Wonderful job on this new form...Congratulations on your win and many thanks for entering my contest...Charlie
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Beata Agustin
Date: 10/10/2018 2:01:00 AM
Praise God! Thanks for your comments, and for the placement. I'm blessed to be a part of your sponsored contest. God bless you.
Date: 10/9/2018 4:36:00 PM
Lovely haiku, many congrats on your win Beata:-) hugs Jan xx
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Beata Agustin
Date: 10/10/2018 2:01:00 AM
Praise God! Thanks for your comments. God bless you.
Date: 10/9/2018 2:33:00 PM
Beautiful, Beata. Congrats on your top win.
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Beata Agustin
Date: 10/10/2018 2:02:00 AM
Praise God! Thanks for your comments. Congratulations likewise. God bless you.
Date: 10/9/2018 11:39:00 AM
- Congratulations on your great haiku, Beata :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Beata Agustin
Date: 10/10/2018 2:03:00 AM
Praise God! Thanks for your comments. God bless you.

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