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Nature Speaks Premiere Contest Winner

I've been watching you Since your beginning Whispering to you A thousand subtle ways Throughout all your days You picked me up as a leaf You were only three Clutching my stem in your tiny hand Long time you stared at me Gazing at my veins, amber colors Other leaves rustled in my fall winds My songs to you, thousands of them You couldn't listen then At twenty three with your friend You laid on your backs one clear night In a grassy field peering starry lights My voice was that galactic silence Too low a whisper for you to hear Only crickets caught your ear Now you did hear In your thirty third year When your first child was born And you heard my primal cry Shook your illusions, you asked why Your deceptions re emerged over time Forty years later, no longer aware Of the cosmic cycle we all share Still my voice too quiet, too low My greater voice in a single clap Disintegrates humanity into smithereens Think tectonic plate shifts are epic? My full voice explodes a supernova A sound no human has ever heard A mere hiccup for me I speak through this fragile human Something of a poet, his intent is fine Make no mistake, his thoughts are mine Oh, I have many stories and wisdoms I could have shared, had you only cared At your end, we will finally embrace As your dust clears And leaves no trace Listen Be aware 4/6/18 Nature Contest Sponsor: Regina McIntosh 5/6/21

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Date: 4/26/2022 9:42:00 AM
Your poem is so beautiful, Greg. "you picked me up as a leaf..." "as your dust clears, leaves no trace." Profound is your message. Congratulations!
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Greg Gaul
Date: 4/27/2022 12:36:00 PM
I most appreciate your insights and comments Ann. Thank you.
Date: 4/26/2022 8:34:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. A "Wonderful/Creative" write. Have a great/blessed day writing away.......................
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Greg Gaul
Date: 4/27/2022 12:41:00 PM
Paula, I know your faith is prominent in your life and poetry, so I appreciate your comment on my humble offering.
Date: 4/25/2022 12:02:00 AM
So delighted you chose to share this with us, Greg. Congrats on your win!
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Greg Gaul
Date: 4/27/2022 12:38:00 PM
Your comments and efforts on this site are most appreciated and skillfully done. Thank you for all you do.
Date: 4/24/2022 6:57:00 PM
Beautiful development of the life-stages with God's graces. Congratulations!
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Greg Gaul
Date: 4/27/2022 12:39:00 PM
So many can identify with these stages, thank you for commenting. Your spirituality is appreciated.
Date: 5/12/2021 11:19:00 AM
Greg! Congratulations on your trophy win. This is a picture of your unique creativity - nature speaking to us. Wonderful take on the contest theme. So happy for you! Congratulations!
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Greg Gaul
Date: 5/12/2021 12:37:00 PM
Sam, Morgan Freeman was my first choice for reader of this poem but now, I think, I should ask you to give it your stage voice spin. Seriously though, thanks for your kind congrats.
Date: 5/12/2021 8:20:00 AM
Congratulations on your top win with this profound as well as graceful poem from your golden pen. This is a write to be read over and over again delving into the imaginative layers of thoughts. Warm wishes ~ Mala
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Greg Gaul
Date: 5/12/2021 12:31:00 PM
Mala, thanks so much for your kind commentary. It means a lot. All the best to you.
Date: 5/11/2021 9:13:00 AM
A fine write Greg, my interpretation is of us being part of the universe that became self aware, but alas we are not aware of that very fact, congratulations on your fine win, cheers David
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Greg Gaul
Date: 5/11/2021 12:42:00 PM
David, you are so correct, awareness is really the byword of this piece. Thank you for noticing and being so thoughtful to comment.
Date: 5/11/2021 9:08:00 AM
Dear Greg, profound magnificence spills with grace and beauty from your golden pen. Every stanza, a place where my heart's imagination can roam the depths and breadths of majestic layers of thoughtful artistry, to explore, feel and linger in wonderment of your grand poem. A poem that grows like concentric circles of significance with every read. A fav! Congratulations for your mighty trophy win with this masterwork, dear poet. Warmest wishes, my inspiring friend.. ~Susan
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Greg Gaul
Date: 5/11/2021 12:49:00 PM
Susan, your visits are a delight to me. I think it is so difficult to self evaluate one's own work, generally speaking. It takes such boldness often just to write it in the first place. But when someone, who you admire, comments positively, as you have done here, it gives one such a boost. Thank you. Thank you.
Date: 5/11/2021 5:02:00 AM
Congratulations!
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Greg Gaul
Date: 5/11/2021 12:50:00 PM
Your notice and kind comment are most appreciated.
Date: 5/11/2021 4:21:00 AM
This is a breathtaking work... I love it. Congrats on the top win. God bless you always, Love, Gina
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Greg Gaul
Date: 5/11/2021 4:57:00 AM
Gina, thanks ever so for your kind remarks and high placement. Sometimes the poem just writes itself. Your hosting is most appreciated and your passion is well recognized.
Date: 12/10/2018 12:19:00 AM
- Congratulations on this great winning poem, Greg :) - At the same time I wish you and your family a peaceful and lovely Christmas :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Greg Gaul
Date: 12/10/2018 1:28:00 PM
Thanks so much for all your good wishes. Congrats to you as well and have a great holiday.
Date: 12/8/2018 10:57:00 PM
Enjoyed reading this nicely done write , Greg,with great imagery. Congratulations on your placement in the contest..
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Greg Gaul
Date: 12/9/2018 11:25:00 AM
Eve, glad my poem connected with you. Thank you.
Date: 12/8/2018 9:51:00 AM
Your take on the contest was brilliant, I agree with Barbara about the last stanza, really profound and emotively deep... I also liked the penultimate stanza, which leads on to the last perfectly.. Congratulations on your first place in the contest..
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Greg Gaul
Date: 12/8/2018 3:31:00 PM
Dear "Silent", if I may use the familiar. A glint of levity. I don't think I've had a more analytical and insightful critique. Seriously now, thank you so much for the award and the time it took and care...makes it all worthwhile. Namaste.
Date: 5/27/2018 10:42:00 PM
I cannot tell you depth of feeling this winning poem had on me, nor how high the goosebumps. Nature speaking, but made me recall..."dust you are and to dust you will return' and then your last stanza and last three lines...WOW Brilliant ending!!!!!!Fantastic.
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Greg Gaul
Date: 5/28/2018 7:22:00 AM
Thank you for looking at the few shiney objects in my ramblings. You are on your way to deeper awareness.
Date: 5/8/2018 8:44:00 PM
Nice one
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Greg Gaul
Date: 5/9/2018 5:38:00 AM
Thank you for your interest and commentary.
Date: 5/4/2018 8:57:00 PM
Congrats on your podium finish, Greg.
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Greg Gaul
Date: 5/5/2018 5:49:00 AM
Thanks Line, I'm surprised and happy. Kind of you to note.
Date: 5/4/2018 1:13:00 PM
Oh I love this! Congratulations on your win with this intriguing and compelling poem. A fave for me.
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Greg Gaul
Date: 5/4/2018 4:19:00 PM
I was hoping that knowledgeable poets, like yourself, would think it was at least a novel try, your kind comment heartens me. Thank you so much.
Date: 5/4/2018 7:19:00 AM
Greg, I sorta rambled through the scattered rhyme pattern and tripped over my metaphoric interpretation of your words....thanks for entering the contest
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Date: 5/4/2018 4:29:00 PM
Sorry if my rhyming tripped you up a bit. Lucky for me, before you entirely lost your balance, it wrenched loose a third place trophy that I was fortunate enough to catch. I'm delighted John that I was in the right place this time and I'm eternally grateful for your running the contest and your largess in awarding my little verse a place. I see your name on many contests and respect your critique and poetic judgment. Thank you so much.

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