Premiere Contest WinnerNature Speaks

I've been watching you
Since your beginning
Whispering to you
A thousand subtle ways
Throughout all your days

You picked me up as a leaf
You were only three
Clutching my stem in your tiny hand
Long time you stared at me

Gazing at my veins, amber colors
Other leaves rustled in my fall winds
My songs to you, thousands of them
You couldn't listen then

At twenty three with your friend
You laid on your backs one clear night
In a grassy field peering starry lights
My voice was that galactic silence
Too low a whisper for you to hear
Only crickets caught your ear

Now you did hear
In your thirty third year
When your first child was born
And you heard my primal cry
Shook your illusions, you asked why

Your deceptions re emerged over time
Forty years later, no longer aware
Of the cosmic cycle we all share
Still my voice too quiet, too low
My greater voice in a single clap
Disintegrates humanity into smithereens

Think tectonic plate shifts are epic?
My full voice explodes a supernova
A sound no human has ever heard
A mere hiccup for me

I speak through this fragile human
Something of a poet, his intent is fine
Make no mistake, his thoughts are mine

Oh, I have many stories and wisdoms
I could have shared, had you only cared
At your end, we will finally embrace
As your dust clears
And leaves no trace

Listen
Be aware



4/6/18

Nature Contest
Sponsor: Regina McIntosh 5/6/21
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Kendrick Avatar
August 25, 2025 at 2:02 PM
Thank you for entering your poetic winning work in my contest. I appreciate you supporting my contest efforts. Congratulations on your winner. Sara K
Peck Avatar
April 26, 2022 at 9:42 AM
Your poem is so beautiful, Greg. "you picked me up as a leaf..." "as your dust clears, leaves no trace." Profound is your message. Congratulations!
Gaul Avatar
April 27, 2022 at 12:36 PM
I most appreciate your insights and comments Ann. Thank you.
Goldsmith Avatar
April 26, 2022 at 8:34 AM
Congratulations on your win. A "Wonderful/Creative" write. Have a great/blessed day writing away.......................
Gaul Avatar
April 27, 2022 at 12:41 PM
Paula, I know your faith is prominent in your life and poetry, so I appreciate your comment on my humble offering.
Seeker Avatar
April 25, 2022 at 12:02 AM
So delighted you chose to share this with us, Greg. Congrats on your win!
Gaul Avatar
April 27, 2022 at 12:38 PM
Your comments and efforts on this site are most appreciated and skillfully done. Thank you for all you do.
Alex Avatar
April 24, 2022 at 6:57 PM
Beautiful development of the life-stages with God's graces. Congratulations!
Gaul Avatar
April 27, 2022 at 12:39 PM
So many can identify with these stages, thank you for commenting. Your spirituality is appreciated.
Kauffman Avatar
May 12, 2021 at 11:19 AM
Greg! Congratulations on your trophy win. This is a picture of your unique creativity - nature speaking to us. Wonderful take on the contest theme. So happy for you! Congratulations!
Gaul Avatar
May 12, 2021 at 12:37 PM
Sam, Morgan Freeman was my first choice for reader of this poem but now, I think, I should ask you to give it your stage voice spin. Seriously though, thanks for your kind congrats.
Ray Choudhury Avatar
May 12, 2021 at 8:20 AM
Congratulations on your top win with this profound as well as graceful poem from your golden pen. This is a write to be read over and over again delving into the imaginative layers of thoughts. Warm wishes ~ Mala
Gaul Avatar
May 12, 2021 at 12:31 PM
Mala, thanks so much for your kind commentary. It means a lot. All the best to you.
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May 11, 2021 at 9:13 AM
A fine write Greg, my interpretation is of us being part of the universe that became self aware, but alas we are not aware of that very fact, congratulations on your fine win, cheers David
Gaul Avatar
May 11, 2021 at 12:42 PM
David, you are so correct, awareness is really the byword of this piece. Thank you for noticing and being so thoughtful to comment.
Ashley Avatar
May 11, 2021 at 9:08 AM
Dear Greg, profound magnificence spills with grace and beauty from your golden pen. Every stanza, a place where my heart's imagination can roam the depths and breadths of majestic layers of thoughtful artistry, to explore, feel and linger in wonderment of your grand poem. A poem that grows like concentric circles of significance with every read. A fav! Congratulations for your mighty trophy win with this masterwork, dear poet. Warmest wishes, my inspiring friend.. ~Susan
Gaul Avatar
May 11, 2021 at 12:49 PM
Susan, your visits are a delight to me. I think it is so difficult to self evaluate one's own work, generally speaking. It takes such boldness often just to write it in the first place. But when someone, who you admire, comments positively, as you have done here, it gives one such a boost. Thank you. Thank you.
Alex Avatar
May 11, 2021 at 5:02 AM
Congratulations!
Gaul Avatar
May 11, 2021 at 12:50 PM
Your notice and kind comment are most appreciated.
Mcintosh Avatar
May 11, 2021 at 4:21 AM
This is a breathtaking work... I love it. Congrats on the top win. God bless you always, Love, Gina
Gaul Avatar
May 11, 2021 at 4:57 AM
Gina, thanks ever so for your kind remarks and high placement. Sometimes the poem just writes itself. Your hosting is most appreciated and your passion is well recognized.
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December 10, 2018 at 12:19 AM
- Congratulations on this great winning poem, Greg :) - At the same time I wish you and your family a peaceful and lovely Christmas :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Gaul Avatar
December 10, 2018 at 1:28 PM
Thanks so much for all your good wishes. Congrats to you as well and have a great holiday.
Roper Avatar
December 8, 2018 at 10:57 PM
Enjoyed reading this nicely done write , Greg,with great imagery. Congratulations on your placement in the contest..
Gaul Avatar
December 9, 2018 at 11:25 AM
Eve, glad my poem connected with you. Thank you.
One Avatar
December 8, 2018 at 9:51 AM
Your take on the contest was brilliant, I agree with Barbara about the last stanza, really profound and emotively deep... I also liked the penultimate stanza, which leads on to the last perfectly.. Congratulations on your first place in the contest..
Gaul Avatar
December 8, 2018 at 3:31 PM
Dear "Silent", if I may use the familiar. A glint of levity. I don't think I've had a more analytical and insightful critique. Seriously now, thank you so much for the award and the time it took and care...makes it all worthwhile. Namaste.
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May 27, 2018 at 10:42 PM
I cannot tell you depth of feeling this winning poem had on me, nor how high the goosebumps. Nature speaking, but made me recall..."dust you are and to dust you will return' and then your last stanza and last three lines...WOW Brilliant ending!!!!!!Fantastic.
Gaul Avatar
May 28, 2018 at 7:22 AM
Thank you for looking at the few shiney objects in my ramblings. You are on your way to deeper awareness.
Sharma Avatar
May 8, 2018 at 8:44 PM
Nice one
Gaul Avatar
May 9, 2018 at 5:38 AM
Thank you for your interest and commentary.
Gauthier Avatar
May 4, 2018 at 8:57 PM
Congrats on your podium finish, Greg.
Gaul Avatar
May 5, 2018 at 5:49 AM
Thanks Line, I'm surprised and happy. Kind of you to note.
Gentry Avatar
May 4, 2018 at 1:13 PM
Oh I love this! Congratulations on your win with this intriguing and compelling poem. A fave for me.
Gaul Avatar
May 4, 2018 at 4:19 PM
I was hoping that knowledgeable poets, like yourself, would think it was at least a novel try, your kind comment heartens me. Thank you so much.
Lawless Avatar
May 4, 2018 at 7:19 AM
Greg, I sorta rambled through the scattered rhyme pattern and tripped over my metaphoric interpretation of your words....thanks for entering the contest
Gaul Avatar
May 4, 2018 at 4:29 PM
Sorry if my rhyming tripped you up a bit. Lucky for me, before you entirely lost your balance, it wrenched loose a third place trophy that I was fortunate enough to catch. I'm delighted John that I was in the right place this time and I'm eternally grateful for your running the contest and your largess in awarding my little verse a place. I see your name on many contests and respect your critique and poetic judgment. Thank you so much.
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