nature of hope

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Poetic Form: Haiku

Inspired: 2023 December 07

*2nd Place*
Any theme Any form
Contest Judged: 2023 December 10
Sponsored by: Sotto Poet

Image: Is Your Butterfly Not Moving by Furswingsandscalythings.com

Dead Butterfly on Blue Table

flies on its mention flutters patiently waiting flung allay echo

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Paula Goldsmith

Date: 12/11/2023 6:32:00 AM

Congratulations on your win. I enjoyed your Haiku write/picture. I love butterflies. Have a blessed day writing away.......................

Hilo Poet
Date: 12/11/2023 7:08:00 AM

Thanks, Paula. Blessings and, Aloha, William

Silent One

Date: 12/10/2023 12:15:00 PM

Congrats on your placement.

Silent One
Date: 12/10/2023 12:26:00 PM

Aloha.. Mahalo

Hilo Poet
Date: 12/10/2023 12:20:00 PM

Yep, hey, thx, Silent One. Aloha, William

Joe Maverick

Date: 12/7/2023 1:18:00 PM

Alloy of empathy Hard emphasis Winging it. Currently.'

Hilo Poet
Date: 12/7/2023 3:15:00 PM

Fl-air with the alphas No less hard of a floor that rudely intro itself

Shadow Hamilton

Date: 12/7/2023 9:42:00 AM

this is not an easy form but you do it justice hugs Shadow

Hilo Poet
Date: 12/7/2023 10:22:00 AM

Aloha, Shadow. An appreciative sharing and visit, my friend. Mahalo, William