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The Anointed Rainbow Oft wander I, espy, tis wondrous world conceive, The role of vapors rise, and darken blue the skies, And ere a bliss dawning, shone promised gift wanting, Ne'er world watered suffuse, wanders an arc of hues. 2020 March 10 *4th Place* Alexandrine - Modified ~~Constance La France 2. nature inspired Rhyming Scheme; aa bb cc dd Howmanysyllables; 8 lines x 6 syllables per = 48 syllables total PS Grammar Checker;

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/28/2020 5:17:00 PM

the last couplet is so stunning, William . I love the idea of the arc of hues wandering! Congrats in Dear heart's contest. I hope you are keeping safe and well there in hawaii.

Hilo Poet
Date: 3/28/2020 5:28:00 PM

Our small town is in a virtual lockdown mode, people in cars, sidewalks empty, stay safe as well, Andrea, and many thanks for your kind referenced thoughts -- Aloha!~@wk

Constance La France

Date: 3/27/2020 10:13:00 AM

William, congratulations on your win in my contest with this lovely poem _Constance

Hilo Poet
Date: 3/27/2020 2:23:00 PM

Thanks kindly, Constance, for your words and placement -- Aloha!~@wk

Eve Roper

Date: 3/25/2020 10:58:00 PM

William, great poem and a big congratulations on your win in Dear Heart’s Alexamdrine contest-. Hugs Eve

Hilo Poet
Date: 3/25/2020 11:02:00 PM

Thanks, Eve, and likewise of a shared joy -- Aloha!~@wk

Sonia Walker

Date: 3/25/2020 3:14:00 PM

William, a lovely tribute to catching a rainbow from above. When we observe a rainbow, we know there is hope for us. ~ Sonia

Hilo Poet
Date: 3/25/2020 3:17:00 PM

My heartfelt thanks, Sonia, for your caring words -- Aloha!~@wk

Tom Cunningham

Date: 3/10/2020 5:19:00 PM

Well written William, nothing more beautiful than a stunning rainbow Love the video clip too. Good luck Tom

Hilo Poet
Date: 3/10/2020 6:55:00 PM

My grateful thanks indeed, Tom, for your thoughtful words are appreciated, Aloha!~@wk

Jan Allison

Date: 3/10/2020 4:30:00 PM

what a glorious descriptive poem William:-) I love rainbows and poems about them:-) hugs Jan xx

Hilo Poet
Date: 3/10/2020 5:03:00 PM

I, in honored respect of rainbows too, my appreciation extended, Jan -- Aloha!~@wk