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Nature In Acrostic

Now I am happy that my sky After scorching heat of summer Turns bluish grey with rainy clouds Urging them to cool and shower Raindrops into pinkish flowers Evening tipsy under smell of Champa ___________________________________________ July 16, 2016 For One Stanza - One Only - Poetry Contest Sponsor: Broken Wings Note: Champa is a small golden yellow/white flower with alluring smell in the evening during rainy season in India

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Kim Merryman

Date: 7/23/2016 9:58:00 PM

Probir, congrats on your placement with this well-written acrostic! Blessings!

Probir Gupta
Date: 7/24/2016 4:03:00 AM

Thank you ...

Paul Callus

Date: 7/20/2016 5:24:00 PM

A welcome arrival of rain after the dry season...delightfully presented, Probir. This acrostic is a merited winning entry! Congratulations. // paul

Probir Gupta
Date: 7/24/2016 4:04:00 AM

Thank you ... Regards ...

Karam Misra
Date: 7/22/2016 12:57:00 AM

How welcome are showers after a hot summer! Oh the smell of champa and jasmine and petrichor .... Nicely and concisely brought out the effect,Probir. Congratulations on your placement.

Probir Gupta
Date: 7/20/2016 11:17:00 PM

Thank you for your kind visit and nice comment ... Regards ...