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birds- day after leftover paczkis Connie Gildersleeve 03/05/2014 * Mijikai Haiku

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Skat A

Date: 5/26/2015 4:47:00 PM

amazing imagery

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/11/2014 8:39:00 PM

just read what you said about this food. It sounds really yummy

Russell Sivey

Date: 3/5/2014 10:54:00 PM

Wow this is a great Mijkai Haiku! I don't know too much about them, but i looked it up and was amazed at how accurate you were to the form! I really enjoyed reading this awesome poem here this evening! What a grandiose piece, Great Work!!

Connie Gildersleeve
Date: 3/6/2014 2:41:00 PM

I belong to a Mijikai Haiku group online. Thank you Russell for your comment. Much appreciated - Connie

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/5/2014 5:49:00 PM

Nice one. Is paczkis a type of bread?

Connie Gildersleeve
Date: 3/6/2014 2:39:00 PM

Paczki Day, celebrated on Tuesday, March 4th known as "Fat Tuesday" in large Polish communities all across the US. Paczki are big donuts filled with many different kinds of cream or fruity, high calorie, fillings. Thanks for stopping by and do your comment. Much appreciated - Connie

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 3/5/2014 12:32:00 PM

- Well done, Connie - ( I am not familiar with: Mijikai Haiku ) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Connie Gildersleeve
Date: 3/5/2014 12:52:00 PM

There's a group "Mijikai Haiku" online that you can join. This type of Haiku is 10 syllables to less . Anne thank you for visiting. Much appreciated - Connie