Nature

Autumn wind whistles gleeful, jaunty tunes
Rustling red leaves harmonize
Nature's choir practice rocks

March 26, 2022
For Kimo Poetry Contest
Nature
by Constance La France
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La France Avatar
April 1, 2022 at 10:37 AM
Ann, congratulations on your win in my Kimo contest with your beautiful poem ~Constance
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April 2, 2022 at 8:58 AM
Thank you so much, Constance. My introduction to Kimo and now I love it.
Dietrich Avatar
March 30, 2022 at 3:09 PM
Congrats on your nature win. Beautiful imagery.
Peck Avatar
March 31, 2022 at 10:04 AM
Thanks, Andrea. I love your Firefly win :)
Kauffman Avatar
March 30, 2022 at 11:54 AM
Such a fun, visual choir practice Ann! Love the creative music metaphor carried through each line that sets up your thematic elements perfectly! Indeed "nature's choir practice rocks!" Just delightful. Congratulations on your win! Sending you musical blessings!
Peck Avatar
March 31, 2022 at 9:55 AM
Sam, Thank you for your musical blessings and comments. I used to sing long ago. Now my dogs and I sing along when a Whole Foods commercial comes on. :)
Goldsmith Avatar
March 30, 2022 at 9:19 AM
Congratulations on your win. A lovely/wonderful write. I can here the choir. Have a blessed day writing away.......................
Peck Avatar
March 31, 2022 at 10:11 AM
Thank you, Paula. A blessed day to you too :)
May Avatar
March 29, 2022 at 8:24 PM
Wonderful write Ann, Congrats on your win
Peck Avatar
April 1, 2022 at 8:18 AM
Thanks for your comments, Joseph.
Roper Avatar
March 28, 2022 at 9:40 PM
Great imagery, Ann, congratulations on your win on Constance’s Kimo contest.
Peck Avatar
March 29, 2022 at 8:33 AM
Thanks so much, Eve. :)
Alex Avatar
March 28, 2022 at 6:55 PM
Very beautiful. Congratulations!
Peck Avatar
March 31, 2022 at 10:10 AM
Thank you, Christuraj!
Ray Choudhury Avatar
March 28, 2022 at 5:07 PM
Huge congratulations on your win, Ann. This is a superb Kimo! "Nature's choir practice rocks" love the musical image! BW ~ Mala
Peck Avatar
March 29, 2022 at 8:32 AM
Thanks, Mala. Spring and music seem to go together. :)
Calasibetta Avatar
March 28, 2022 at 3:15 PM
Stopping back again with a big Congratulations on your win in the contest. :)Paulette
Peck Avatar
March 29, 2022 at 3:47 PM
Thank you again, Paulette!
Allison Avatar
March 28, 2022 at 1:03 PM
your poem is music to my ears, many congrats in your win:-) hugs Jan xx
Peck Avatar
March 29, 2022 at 8:30 AM
Thanks so much, Jan!
Clear Avatar
March 27, 2022 at 8:46 AM
I would not have thought of the nature sounds as you did !! So original Anne. Am going to listen intently. Thx , made me want to be outside. Springtime here. Best to you. suzanne
Peck Avatar
March 31, 2022 at 10:13 AM
Thanks Sweet Suzanne. :)
Wolf Avatar
March 26, 2022 at 9:30 PM
Love attending that 'choir practice' on a daily basis. Free concert-time for one and all. Nice one, Ann. :) gw
Peck Avatar
March 27, 2022 at 4:42 PM
Thanks, Gershon :)
Calasibetta Avatar
March 26, 2022 at 12:09 PM
Lovely, serene and filled with song. Good luck in the contest. :)Paulette
Peck Avatar
March 26, 2022 at 2:43 PM
Thanks so much, Paulette :)
Peck Avatar
March 26, 2022 at 2:42 PM
Thanks so much, Paulette :)
Leffanta Avatar
March 26, 2022 at 11:25 AM
LOVE the last line! Aloha!
Peck Avatar
March 26, 2022 at 2:41 PM
Thanks, Rico :) Aloha!
Hankins Avatar
March 26, 2022 at 8:40 AM
Beautiful, superb. As a musician, this one really resonates with me. Thanks for sharing it.
Peck Avatar
March 26, 2022 at 8:46 AM
Thanks, Milton. I used to sing. Now, I sing with my two dogs :)
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