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Written: January 23, 2024 _____________________________________ Behold tinsel atop snow-capped mountains, Where towering walls of gathered ice rise high. Celestial waves flow into boiling fountains, And flying, thawing spice fills the endless sky. A vibrant tapestry unfolds as a kaleidoscope Blurs appear in a realm of multi-angle vision. The dawn is a genuine golden spectroscope. Embracing every region, invoking raw allusion. Sunset beams ignite the top with Eurasian light, Dying blooms at azure are a welcoming night. Moon, stars, and aurora borealis waltz with hope, Velvety, dome akin to sky covers forthcoming scope. In spring, clay and snow mix to create fresh birth, Lava flora and ice fruits grow greater than on Earth. An occult quiet creeps over this view and is fixed, All this awe is an ode to one true Creator, unmixed.

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Valsa George

Date: 1/26/2024 3:35:00 AM

Such a beautiful and scintillating mountain view with its pinnacle laden with layers of ice. Stunning versification with perfect rhyming ! indeed mesmerizing.....! Well done, dear friend ! Into my FAVE.

Susan Ashley

Date: 1/25/2024 5:57:00 PM

Dear Lasaad, your mystical, magical imagery sweeps my imagination up and away to the majesty of " snow-capped mountains" where the "Moon, stars, and aurora borealis waltz with hope". Your vivid verse lifts the heart and the spirit in gratitude for His natural gifts of splendor. An exquisite poem from your inspired pen. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan

Sara Kendrick

Date: 1/25/2024 7:38:00 AM

Ahh!!! Beautiful scene. God knew how much these scenes would mean to his highest creation so we are honored to be able to see them and share them in pictures with others plus being able to share our emotions about the scenes. Thank you for sharing this with us and for dropping by my page. Sara K

Daniel Henry Rodgers

Date: 1/25/2024 6:28:00 AM

Dear Sotto, Your poem is a guided journey through nature's splendor, imagery of snow-capped mountains, waves, and glorious landscapes. The imagery are blessed with wonder and reverence for the beauty of the world around us. Through your lyrical prose, you pay a beautiful homage to the one true Creator of this awe-inspiring spectacle. Feeling Blessed, Daniel

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 1/25/2024 3:24:00 AM

- A wonderful poem, Las ... nature gives of its beauty ... if one takes the time to appreciate it ... I enjoy your poetic nature pictures :) - hugs

Silent One

Date: 1/24/2024 11:05:00 AM

My dear friend Sotto, This enchanting poem paints a mesmerizing picture of a celestial landscape, where tinsel adorns snow-capped mountains and towering walls of gathered ice create a breathtaking panorama. The use of celestial waves, boiling fountains, and flying, thawing spice evokes a sense of wonder and magic in the natural world. The imagery continues to unfold in a vibrant way described as a kaleidoscope where blurs appear in a realm of multi-angle vision

Jay Narain

Date: 1/24/2024 10:57:00 AM

Nice poem. Love the Alpine scent in the mountains.

Vijay Pandit

Date: 1/24/2024 6:01:00 AM

Indeed! Nature's splendor adorns your poem my friend. Splendid descriptions throughout like: Behold tinsel atop snow-capped mountains, Where towering walls of gathered ice rise high--The dawn is a genuine golden spectroscope...

Ink Empress

Date: 1/24/2024 3:57:00 AM

Ah dr sotto what a descriptive write that flows with such eloquent imagery. I am truly in awe of your wah with weaving words! I love so many lines in this but the opening and the ending hits the soul of the reader so strongly. I especially love “ Sunset beams ignite the top with Eurasian light, Dying blooms at azure are a welcoming night. Moon, stars, and aurora borealis waltz with hope,“ so ethereal and magical and i can see through your words all that you’ve described! Just stunning! Love it

Bill Baker

Date: 1/23/2024 6:32:00 PM

Magical imagery, my friend. Your words flow so smoothly as I read. It is a comfortable place to be, as I drift off to the mountains you see. Your words are so serene that it touches me and stirs many emotions. Thanks for sharing the beauty you see, through your luminescent poetry. Have a pleasant evening. Bill

Paige Hind

Date: 1/23/2024 6:18:00 PM

Beautiful. I live in the mountains. Love "thawing spice" in the skies- gorgeous.

Heidi Sands

Date: 1/23/2024 6:05:00 PM

Beautiful poem. I enjoyed this very much :)

Sara Etgen-Baker

Date: 1/23/2024 5:06:00 PM

A masterpiece, dear Sotto. I admire your ability to imagine and create such splendorous, mystical images--images that come to life on the screen. As I read, I found myself dwelling in this beautiful realm. Mountains are majestic and captivating. (For several years, I lived near the Franklin Mountains--the views were breathtaking as I drove to work.) I especially liked this line: Moon, stars, and aurora borealis waltz with hope. My heart all but danced as I read those words. Sara

Joseph May

Date: 1/23/2024 4:06:00 PM

Very nicely penned Sotto, best wishes

Speaks Volumes

Date: 1/23/2024 3:21:00 PM

Awe inspiring verse dear poet ! What talent you have for bringing to life what nature has created. Not to suggest the kaleidoscope added vibrant color, but to have it offering blurs of multi angled vision, is genius. The whole spectrum you have laid before us is breathtaking and attributing it to our one creator, is purely divine.

Smita Kulkarni

Date: 1/23/2024 1:52:00 PM

Beautifully described! I could visualize it!!