Natural Blondes

Bouncing blond ringlets To generations bestowed From my childhood head.

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James Fraser

Date: 8/21/2010 11:08:00 AM

Good luck in the contest with this fair Senyru Francine >> James

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/16/2010 9:18:00 PM

This is wonderful, Francine! I wish I could be one (natural) It ruined my hair when I overbleached to get that effect! LUv, Andrea

Tom Mcmurray

Date: 8/16/2010 6:52:00 PM

A very well constructed and rhythmic senyru Francine. I loved the opening line of "Bouncing blond ringlets" which utilized assonance and alliterative spice to great effect. Good luck in the contest. tom

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 8/16/2010 6:42:00 PM

Very meaningful Senryu, Francine

Carrie Richards

Date: 8/16/2010 6:31:00 PM

Mine too.....but they darkened as I got older! I hear blondes have more fun....I wish I could have found if that is true? Perhaps you can tell me? ha ha! Sweet poem, Francine...good luck! :)

Ravindra K Kapoor

Date: 8/16/2010 9:15:00 AM

Extremely beautiful Senryu. My good wishes for your contest. And many thanks for your lovely comments on my Poem for Linda M B. Love and best wishes.....Ravindra......Francine Roberts

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 8/16/2010 7:21:00 AM

OK, so now I know we have yet one more thing in common! It's great getting to know you through your poetry, Francine. If we lived closer, I think we'd become good friends. Love, Carolyn