Nativity

christmas play with delight children neigh manger scene lovely sight halo's sheen children pray silent night grand display December 17,2019 Have a Merry 3-Cubed Christmas Poetry Contest Sponsored by Andrea Dietrich

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Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 12/31/2019 9:55:00 PM

This is lovely Sandra. Congratulations on your win! Hau'oli Makahiki Hou! xxoo

Sandra Adams
Date: 12/31/2019 10:57:00 PM

Thank you so much my friend. Happy New Year ... hugs XoXo

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 12/29/2019 1:02:00 PM

- Congratulations on your great winning poem, dear Sandra :) - Happy New Year ... with new poems and new contests ... new chances and new ideas :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Sandra Adams
Date: 12/29/2019 5:27:00 PM

Thank you so much my friend... Happy New Year to you... hugs and cheers to new poems being born... :)

Paul Callus

Date: 12/29/2019 11:29:00 AM

A Nativity scene is indeed the nearest one can get to describe a Christmas setting, Sandra! Congratulations on your merited win. Regards // paul

Sandra Adams
Date: 12/29/2019 12:30:00 PM

Thank you so much Paul...i do hope you are feeling much better... hugs

Janice Canerdy

Date: 12/28/2019 4:41:00 PM

CONGRATULATIONS on your well-deserved win, Sandra. Janice

Sandra Adams
Date: 12/28/2019 8:56:00 PM

Thank you Janice :) hugs

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 12/28/2019 3:02:00 PM

that was so sweet the imagery of the children neighing in the Christmas play! Congrats for a podium win in my contest, Sandy

Sandra Adams
Date: 12/28/2019 3:32:00 PM

Thank you so much Andrea for hosting the contest and feeling my poem worthy of a win :) hugs

Caren Krutsinger

Date: 12/17/2019 5:32:00 PM

I love brevity when it is written like this. Gorgeous write, Sandra.

Sandra Adams
Date: 12/17/2019 6:56:00 PM

Thank you so much Caren... :) hugs

Running Wolves

Date: 12/17/2019 4:58:00 PM

Beautiful brevity

Sandra Adams
Date: 12/17/2019 6:55:00 PM

thank you :)

Vijay Pandit

Date: 12/17/2019 3:46:00 PM

Still just as festive and beautiful (I know you changed it)--not familiar with this form--all the best, Sandy.

Sandra Adams
Date: 12/17/2019 3:56:00 PM

Thank you Vijay the first one I did wrong apparently the first and third lines rhyme but then the middle line in all three has to rhyme. I had to change it to fit the rules I think I got it now Hugs

Chris Green

Date: 12/17/2019 1:06:00 PM

Now this is perfect. Silent Night works wonderfully in this. You have composed a complete story in this and it is wonderful. Definitely a winner. Nicely fixed my friend. : )

Sandra Adams
Date: 12/17/2019 2:37:00 PM

Thank you Chris. I had to sacrifice my drummer but I guess silent night works out. :) hugs

Alexis Y.

Date: 12/17/2019 11:30:00 AM

WoW! Sandra, I thought I commented on this one. Nevertheless , you created such a lovely sight with your words. I get it's like a Christmas play, about the nativity scene. You did a great job with this new form. Have a wonderful day:-) Alexis

Sandra Adams
Date: 12/17/2019 11:34:00 AM

Thank you Alexis...you did comment but my first attempt was wrong... the middle line must rhyme with the center line in all three stanzas...i had to rework it... hugs... enjoy your day!