Sandra Adams Poet Rhyme

Nativity

christmas play
with delight
children neigh

manger scene
lovely sight
halo's sheen

children pray
silent night
grand display

December 17,2019
Have a Merry 3-Cubed Christmas Poetry Contest
Sponsored by Andrea Dietrich

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Connie Marcum Wong December 31, 2019 at 9:55 PM This is lovely Sandra. Congratulations on your win! Hau'oli Makahiki Hou! xxoo Sandra Adams December 31, 2019 at 10:57 PM Thank you so much my friend. Happy New Year ... hugs XoXo

Anne-Lise Andresen December 29, 2019 at 1:02 PM - Congratulations on your great winning poem, dear Sandra :) - Happy New Year ... with new poems and new contests ... new chances and new ideas :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :) Sandra Adams December 29, 2019 at 5:27 PM Thank you so much my friend... Happy New Year to you... hugs and cheers to new poems being born... :)

Paul Callus December 29, 2019 at 11:29 AM A Nativity scene is indeed the nearest one can get to describe a Christmas setting, Sandra! Congratulations on your merited win. Regards // paul Sandra Adams December 29, 2019 at 12:30 PM Thank you so much Paul...i do hope you are feeling much better... hugs

Janice Canerdy December 28, 2019 at 4:41 PM CONGRATULATIONS on your well-deserved win, Sandra. Janice Sandra Adams December 28, 2019 at 8:56 PM Thank you Janice :) hugs

Andrea Dietrich December 28, 2019 at 3:02 PM that was so sweet the imagery of the children neighing in the Christmas play! Congrats for a podium win in my contest, Sandy Sandra Adams December 28, 2019 at 3:32 PM Thank you so much Andrea for hosting the contest and feeling my poem worthy of a win :) hugs

Caren Krutsinger December 17, 2019 at 5:32 PM I love brevity when it is written like this. Gorgeous write, Sandra. Sandra Adams December 17, 2019 at 6:56 PM Thank you so much Caren... :) hugs

Running Wolves December 17, 2019 at 4:58 PM Beautiful brevity Sandra Adams December 17, 2019 at 6:55 PM thank you :)

Vijay Pandit December 17, 2019 at 3:46 PM Still just as festive and beautiful (I know you changed it)--not familiar with this form--all the best, Sandy. Sandra Adams December 17, 2019 at 3:56 PM Thank you Vijay the first one I did wrong apparently the first and third lines rhyme but then the middle line in all three has to rhyme. I had to change it to fit the rules I think I got it now Hugs

Chris Green December 17, 2019 at 1:06 PM Now this is perfect. Silent Night works wonderfully in this. You have composed a complete story in this and it is wonderful. Definitely a winner. Nicely fixed my friend. : ) Sandra Adams December 17, 2019 at 2:37 PM Thank you Chris. I had to sacrifice my drummer but I guess silent night works out. :) hugs

Alexis Y. December 17, 2019 at 11:30 AM WoW! Sandra, I thought I commented on this one. Nevertheless , you created such a lovely sight with your words. I get it's like a Christmas play, about the nativity scene. You did a great job with this new form. Have a wonderful day:-) Alexis Sandra Adams December 17, 2019 at 11:34 AM Thank you Alexis...you did comment but my first attempt was wrong... the middle line must rhyme with the center line in all three stanzas...i had to rework it... hugs... enjoy your day!