Native American People

The old indian chief had seen much
fought in many a battle or raid
he had fathered seven children 
with his four fine young wives

Now he took his ease 
sat smoking his pipe 
with the other elders
spent time in dreamland

He knew it would not be long
before the great white spirit
came calling out his name
he had made his peace with all

His children and wives wept
when he departed in his sleep
they carefully dressed him
and laid him on the platform

His favourite spear and shield
thick fur rugs and some pots
his faithful horse battle dressed
some gold and his finest headdress

When all was ready the witch doctor
Set the platform ablaze with fire
wailing his wives mourned his passing
as the fire died his ashes blew away

Now in the after life
he hunts once more
riding the ghost horse
he races through the skies

10/31/2013

contest: Native American People
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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Kendrick Avatar
November 29, 2013 at 11:12 AM
Interesting lines penned..Enjoyed reading today..Way to go with this winner..Congrats.Sara
Hamilton Avatar
November 30, 2013 at 7:33 AM
ty Sara nice to see you glad you enjoyed this I will be paying you a visit Shadow x smile hug
Kearley Avatar
November 26, 2013 at 1:23 AM
A very nice write, Shadow. Thank you for stopping by with kind comments. :o)
Hamilton Avatar
November 26, 2013 at 5:44 AM
I enjoyed my visit to your page Dan ty for liking this Shadow x smile hug
Deschler Avatar
November 25, 2013 at 10:00 PM
A wonderful story that kept my interest all the way through! Very nicely written, Shadow! Congratulations on your win!...Thank you for the kind congrats on my poem. I appreciate it very much!
Hamilton Avatar
November 26, 2013 at 5:43 AM
your poem was great Kelly Ty for nice remarks Shadow x smile hug
A   Avatar
November 25, 2013 at 9:25 PM
Shadow, a wonderful winning poem.... Congratulations on the win... luv~ Linda
Hamilton Avatar
November 26, 2013 at 5:42 AM
hi Linda ty I enjoyed yours too Shadow x smile hug
Sirak Avatar
November 25, 2013 at 8:28 AM
Congrats on your win. This is a finely crafted poem.
Hamilton Avatar
November 26, 2013 at 5:41 AM
hi and ty Moneterey Shadow x smile hug
Mehta Avatar
November 24, 2013 at 10:01 PM
Congratulations on this fine win, Shadow
Hamilton Avatar
November 26, 2013 at 5:40 AM
ty Ram I enjoyed yours too Shadow x smile hug
Adams Avatar
November 24, 2013 at 4:11 PM
yay...congrats on your win Shadow :) hugs
Hamilton Avatar
November 24, 2013 at 4:39 PM
hi Sandra and ty dear Shadow x smile hug
Jones Avatar
November 24, 2013 at 3:52 PM
You are a fantastic story teller Shadow...congratulations on your win...
Hamilton Avatar
November 24, 2013 at 4:40 PM
moi? ty Donna appreciated Shadow x smile hug
Guzzi Avatar
November 24, 2013 at 3:18 PM
Mine was about their death rituals too. Passing On of Little Bee, Ojibway, Thunder Bay [you might enjoy it Shadow] Congrad's on your win. Light & Love
Hamilton Avatar
November 24, 2013 at 4:41 PM
hi Debbie sure will read it ty Shadow x smile hug
Rain Avatar
November 24, 2013 at 1:59 PM
Congratulations ! well deserved Win , and I am so amazed after judging to see all of the names that is indiscriminately gave wins to ! Thank-you !
Hamilton Avatar
November 24, 2013 at 4:42 PM
hi Shanty firstly ty for your lovely and fun contest. also ty for my placement Shadow x smile hug
Rain Avatar
November 24, 2013 at 2:00 PM
typo "that I indiscriminately gave wins to. "
Adams Avatar
November 4, 2013 at 10:53 AM
naturally I would love this one...since a teen I was drawn to native American Indians culture, ironically my own grandson Is part of the heritage... great story nicely penned here Shadow... hope you get to feeling better soon :) hugs
Hamilton Avatar
November 4, 2013 at 10:57 AM
Hi Sandra so do I still pretty poorly. Interesting about your grandson. glad you enjoyed Shadow x smile
Kendrick Avatar
November 4, 2013 at 7:58 AM
Reads like winning material to me..I read once that the Indian said how one prepared their people for death spoke more of how they had lived than any other thing..Now so many are just sending their loved ones off to be cremated..Thanks for the visit to my page..Sara
Hamilton Avatar
November 4, 2013 at 10:58 AM
sad Sara it comes down to cost. glad you enjoyed Shadow x smile
Lamoureux Avatar
November 1, 2013 at 6:33 PM
This is amazing Shadow, you drew me into the story. I love native artwork, I have a number of stone carvings and some pottery.
Hamilton Avatar
November 4, 2013 at 11:08 AM
Hi Rick Ty dear happy you enjoyed it Shadow x smile
Devnath  Avatar
November 1, 2013 at 6:15 PM
The old Indian chief is very interesting. The total fact is wonderfully worded. Fun indeed. Good luck in the contest. Loved always, bl
Hamilton Avatar
November 4, 2013 at 11:06 AM
Bl ty so much glad you like it Shadow x smile
Dietrich Avatar
November 1, 2013 at 12:37 AM
very nicely done. Reminded me of when I saw Dances with Wolves.
Hamilton Avatar
November 4, 2013 at 11:06 AM
Andrea ty glad you liked it Shadow x smile
Jones Avatar
October 31, 2013 at 7:35 PM
Very nice shadow.....good luck.....
Hamilton Avatar
November 4, 2013 at 11:03 AM
hi Donna and ty sry I am ill so am far behind on answering remarks. Shadow x smile
Matose Avatar
October 31, 2013 at 2:18 PM
A great tribute to the Native Gentleman. I fancy I see his horse each time when there is thunder and clouds! Thanks for sharing. Friend, JM
Hamilton Avatar
November 4, 2013 at 10:59 AM
you as well lol. glad you enjoyed Joseph hug Shadow x smile
Anglesey Avatar
October 31, 2013 at 10:50 AM
Wow, this one gave me goosebumps. Spectacular imagery and ending!
Hamilton Avatar
October 31, 2013 at 11:16 AM
never heard of a native man being burnt with his wife how fair is that lol
Hamilton Avatar
October 31, 2013 at 11:14 AM
hi Karen Ty many tribes burnt their dead they believe it sets the soul free sometimes it was with their favourite horse, dog and even favourite wife Shadow x smile hug
Trifiatis Avatar
October 31, 2013 at 8:17 AM
FANTASTIC! Metaphysical, spiritual, wise! What an honor for the chief! What a delight for the heavens! A 7!
Hamilton Avatar
October 31, 2013 at 11:11 AM
hi Demetrios I was unsure on this one so delighted you like it Ty Shadow x smile hug
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