Nate Has His Eye On Me

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Hurricane Harvey landed his punches to the left of me Irma struck with fierce winds and rain; havoc on my right I escaped the wrath of those hellions ~ now there's Nate. Nate formed in an unusual area, not known for brutal storms, but he's coming for a visit soon. I hope he doesn't stay around very long. I didn't invite him to my city, so he's being rude by showing up this weekend and ruining everyone's plans. I pray he's not as devastating as the evil two he follows, but hurricanes do as they please. Wham! Bam! What a mess... putting us all under stress. He'll huff and puff and try to blow my house down. He seems to be in a hurry cuz he's moving with some speed. I'll be glad to see the tail end of him. A one-eyed cyclops, a meanie and a fiend, who'll probably rob me of my power. If you don't see me around, you know where I can be found... sweltering in New Orleans heat because Nate visited my town. 10/6/17

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Frederic Parker

Date: 10/7/2017 9:27:00 PM

your city is already below sea level so you don't need much water to have a lot of damage...irma was headed directly at me until it was about 2 hundred miles away then its center missed me by 30 miles...stay safe my friend...I actually know how you feel right now...

John Gondolf

Date: 10/7/2017 8:58:00 AM

Lin, my thoughts and prayers are with you and the rest of the residents of The Crescent City, my favorite town not in Texas!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 10/6/2017 7:20:00 PM

Oh, Lin, you poor thing down there. If it's not one thing, it's another. Loved your personification for these holy terrors.

Charlie Smith

Date: 10/6/2017 12:16:00 PM

Batten down the hatches girl, a strong breeze is gonna blow, I hope not to hard...

Tim Smith

Date: 10/6/2017 10:56:00 AM

Be safe...I hear Applebee's has $1 Margaritas so you might want to bunker down there.

Lin Lane
Date: 10/6/2017 10:58:00 AM

haha Tim. Applebee's is about 2 miles away. Tempting but a clear head is necessary. No Hurricane party for me.

Jan Allison

Date: 10/6/2017 10:39:00 AM

Gee Lin I have just googled the weather in your part of the world and found the very same pic you are showing. I see the temperatures are really high so you need no hurricane just a chance to get out in the sun so just tell Nate to 'naff off' and stay out at sea and cause no havoc . thinking of you my friend:-) hugs jan xx

Lin Lane
Date: 10/6/2017 10:59:00 AM

I'm afraid he wouldn't listen to me, Jan. I just hope he doesn't intensify more than he's predicted...should just be a cat 1. That's powerful enough. Today is lovely...it's in the 70s and bright and sunny.