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Nasty Gnat

I was bitten by a gnat Who didn't ask permission I caught the little rascal How dare he bite me? I put him into a jar. He made a big commotion. So I put a stamp on jar. Sent him to Carrie. By: Joyce Johnson Came in 2nd

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Rhonda Johnson-Saunders

Date: 4/16/2012 8:15:00 PM

Congrats on your super win Joyce! Blessings, Rhonda

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 4/16/2012 11:53:00 AM

Congratulations on your well deserved placement in Linda-Marie's "Bite Me" contest Joyce. Love, Carol

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl

Date: 4/15/2012 1:57:00 AM

Congratulations on your super win Joyce xx

Gwendolen Song

Date: 4/14/2012 9:20:00 PM

Clever idea to mail your rascally gnat to Carrie. A great entry and oh so fun to read! Are u STILL looking for the needle in the haystack?,,,,ha ah...I can't get that image outta my mind!...Congrats on this Gnasty Gnat poem's success. Love, Gwendolen

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 4/14/2012 8:49:00 PM

good one to send to Carrie, Joyce. Big congrats on your win.

Deborah Burch

Date: 4/14/2012 8:09:00 PM

ahhaahaa! cute Joyce!! Congratulations on your win...big hugs,love deb

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 4/14/2012 7:30:00 PM

congrats Joyce on a super win with this sensational entry luv..

Carrie Richards

Date: 4/10/2012 10:53:00 AM

Unfortunately, the jar broke, the gnat bit me too...., I called in the dog, he gave me fleas, and I ran to Kim's house!! LOL !!! What a busy, buggy, day !!! :) (ps...thanks for the present, Joyce....!!! It was fun!

Jack Horne

Date: 4/7/2012 7:01:00 AM

lol, love this witty one, joyce - hope carrie received the little devil. with our postal service in england, who knows where that gnat would end up. many congrats on your wins

Chittaranjan Dey

Date: 4/6/2012 9:27:00 PM

Nice poetry.