Joyce Johnson Poet Dodoitsu

Nasty Gnat

I was bitten by a gnat
Who didn't ask permission
I caught the little rascal
How dare he bite me?

I put him into a jar.
He made a big commotion.
So I put a stamp on jar.
Sent him to Carrie.

By: Joyce Johnson Came in 2nd

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Rhonda Johnson-Saunders April 16, 2012 at 8:15 PM Congrats on your super win Joyce! Blessings, Rhonda

Carol Sunshine Brown April 16, 2012 at 11:53 AM Congratulations on your well deserved placement in Linda-Marie's "Bite Me" contest Joyce. Love, Carol

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl April 15, 2012 at 1:57 AM Congratulations on your super win Joyce xx

Gwendolen Song April 14, 2012 at 9:20 PM Clever idea to mail your rascally gnat to Carrie. A great entry and oh so fun to read! Are u STILL looking for the needle in the haystack?,,,,ha ah...I can't get that image outta my mind!...Congrats on this Gnasty Gnat poem's success. Love, Gwendolen

Andrea Dietrich April 14, 2012 at 8:49 PM good one to send to Carrie, Joyce. Big congrats on your win.

Deborah Burch April 14, 2012 at 8:09 PM ahhaahaa! cute Joyce!! Congratulations on your win...big hugs,love deb

Linda-Marie Sweetheart April 14, 2012 at 7:30 PM congrats Joyce on a super win with this sensational entry luv..

Carrie Richards April 10, 2012 at 10:53 AM Unfortunately, the jar broke, the gnat bit me too...., I called in the dog, he gave me fleas, and I ran to Kim's house!! LOL !!! What a busy, buggy, day !!! :) (ps...thanks for the present, Joyce....!!! It was fun!

Jack Horne April 7, 2012 at 7:01 AM lol, love this witty one, joyce - hope carrie received the little devil. with our postal service in england, who knows where that gnat would end up. many congrats on your wins

Chittaranjan Dey April 6, 2012 at 9:27 PM Nice poetry.