Narwhal

Pods of narwhals navigate Arctic seas, while other whales are locked out; without keys. Swimming along fractures takes expertise, thick ice packs are nothing more than a tease. Naturally nimble, they glide and squeeze between invisible currents with ease. They seem to fly as if on a trapeze, harnessing waves like birds riding a breeze. Though floating together like fallen leaves, they have never seen a forest of trees. And whenever the ice buckles and heaves, they slip through the cracks where water doesn't freeze. And awed by their tusks, I drop to my knees, I've never seen creatures stranger than these. (Monorhyme Sonnet) 2/11/2017
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Gauthier Avatar
May 25, 2018 at 8:50 PM
A fun poem, Emile.
Pinet Avatar
May 26, 2018 at 8:41 AM
Thanks Line, your comments are always welcome my friend, Emile.
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February 12, 2017 at 9:40 AM
A definate 7+! Your imagery is full-on, for a moment you had me cruising waves with (maybe on) the whale with the mythical horn!!...peace, Jill
Pinet Avatar
February 12, 2017 at 12:51 PM
Thanks Jill, it's always a pleasure to hear from you my friend, Emile.
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February 12, 2017 at 2:52 AM
I love your monorhyme words, they are catchy and smooth. Impressive, light weight and a good time. Good luck in all things ... CayCay
Pinet Avatar
February 12, 2017 at 8:32 AM
Thanks CayCay, your support is greatly appreciated, Emile.
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February 11, 2017 at 1:09 PM
Fabulous monorhyme and wonderful topic, 7 from me! Good luck
Pinet Avatar
February 11, 2017 at 5:38 PM
Thanks Maureen, I appreciate your support, Emile.
Smith Avatar
February 11, 2017 at 12:09 PM
Well done Emile, best wishes in the contest...
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February 11, 2017 at 12:20 PM
Thanks Charlie, I value your opinion, Emile.
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