Narwhal

Pods of narwhals navigate Arctic seas, while other whales are locked out; without keys. Swimming along fractures takes expertise, thick ice packs are nothing more than a tease. Naturally nimble, they glide and squeeze between invisible currents with ease. They seem to fly as if on a trapeze, harnessing waves like birds riding a breeze. Though floating together like fallen leaves, they have never seen a forest of trees. And whenever the ice buckles and heaves, they slip through the cracks where water doesn't freeze. And awed by their tusks, I drop to my knees, I've never seen creatures stranger than these. (Monorhyme Sonnet) 2/11/2017

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Date: 5/25/2018 8:50:00 PM
A fun poem, Emile.
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Emile Pinet
Date: 5/26/2018 8:41:00 AM
Thanks Line, your comments are always welcome my friend, Emile.
Date: 2/12/2017 9:40:00 AM
A definate 7+! Your imagery is full-on, for a moment you had me cruising waves with (maybe on) the whale with the mythical horn!!...peace, Jill
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Emile Pinet
Date: 2/12/2017 12:51:00 PM
Thanks Jill, it's always a pleasure to hear from you my friend, Emile.
Date: 2/12/2017 2:52:00 AM
I love your monorhyme words, they are catchy and smooth. Impressive, light weight and a good time. Good luck in all things ... CayCay
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Emile Pinet
Date: 2/12/2017 8:32:00 AM
Thanks CayCay, your support is greatly appreciated, Emile.
Date: 2/11/2017 1:09:00 PM
Fabulous monorhyme and wonderful topic, 7 from me! Good luck
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Date: 2/11/2017 5:38:00 PM
Thanks Maureen, I appreciate your support, Emile.
Date: 2/11/2017 12:09:00 PM
Well done Emile, best wishes in the contest...
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Date: 2/11/2017 12:20:00 PM
Thanks Charlie, I value your opinion, Emile.
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