Narrow Margin

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Narrow Margin.-.Aerial Show flying under the Sydney Harbour Bridge.

Sponsor:Edward Ibeh Contest Name:This or That, Vol 23

Date : 16th February 2024

/ Light chances go by / Error is nigh / Formulated chance / Doubt enhance / Slender funnel / N Escape tunnel / A Romancing a stone / R Left alone / R Carefully going / O Rapids flowing / W Narrow pathway / Don’t delay / Sideways creep / Ever so steep / Shuffle past / Squeeze in at last / M Can hardly make it / A Just try to take it / R Looming tightly / G Be very spritely / I Hard to admit / N Not sure it will fit / Gently steer it / We will clear it / The Airplane asunder / Bridge it flew under / Business decision / N Tight precision / A Close vote / R Can’t gloat / R Deep ravine / O Problem seen / W Alternative way / Too tight today / Might make it / If we fake it / Narrow fit / Might make it / M Close score / A Need one more / R Inches to spare / G Chance is fair / I Narrow escape / N Out of shape / Squeezed beneath / Skin of our teeth / Praying again / Thank you, Amen

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Edward Ibeh

Date: 3/4/2024 8:58:00 AM

Heartiest congratulations on your podium win in my contest with this beautifully composed rhyme poem, SV:-) I thoroughly enjoyed the read. Quite creative, I might add!

Speaks Volumes
Date: 3/4/2024 11:23:00 AM

Thank you Edward. Appreciated.

Christuraj Alex

Date: 3/1/2024 8:17:00 PM

"Might make it / M Close score / A Need one more / R Inches to spare / G Chance is fair / I Narrow escape / N Out of shape / Squeezed beneath" - Beautifully written. Congratulations!

Speaks Volumes
Date: 3/1/2024 8:20:00 PM

This made me happy, I was kinda proud of it. Thank you so very much for taking the time to tell me you liked it. Its really appreciated. Best wishes from Wen.