Narrow Margin

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Written 12th Feb 2024 "Narrow Margin" This or that, vol 23 Edward Ibeh

I'm the part that exists That you think nothing of, A gap to keep neat your work. I'm the part that exists To remain clear, to be filled On every single text filled page. Consciously or not, I'm put in place. And by so, I give you a chance To note down something important. I'm the part that exists, That nearly gets a look. A look inside your book... You may say, "That was close" Or, "This is small but it is Our only opportunity!" Or if time squeezes tight, In anguish you fight To meet a deadline set. Seen and invisible, Literal and metaphorical. I am... I am the Narrow Margin.

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Edward Ibeh

Date: 3/4/2024 9:06:00 AM

Heartiest congratulations on your win in my contest with this fantastic poem, Natasha:-) I loved it!

Natasha L Scragg
Date: 3/5/2024 7:00:00 AM

Thanks Edward. Was an interesting theme for your contest. :-D

Christuraj Alex

Date: 3/1/2024 8:22:00 PM

"I'm the part that exists, That nearly gets a look. A look inside your book..." - Very beautifully written. Congratulations!

Natasha L Scragg
Date: 3/2/2024 9:21:00 AM

Thank you :-D

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 3/1/2024 8:51:00 AM

Back with Congratulations on your win. I enjoyed reading your wonderful "Narrow Margin" write again. Have a great/blessed day with your win.....................

Natasha L Scragg
Date: 3/1/2024 1:17:00 PM

Thank you Paula :-) Enjoy your day too x

Daniel Henry Rodgers

Date: 2/12/2024 6:15:00 PM

Dear Natasha, your really capture the often overlooked yet vital role of the narrow margin. Your words display a significance within the seemingly mundane, highlighting its function as a space for important notes and reflections. The metaphorical depth you bring to the concept will touch readers, showing the delicate balance between seen and invisible elements in our lives. Your poem eloquently celebrates the narrow margin as both literal and metaphorical, inviting contemplation and appreciation for the spaces that shape our existence. Good Luck and Blessings, Daniel

Natasha L Scragg
Date: 2/13/2024 3:49:00 AM

Wow thanks so much for your encouragement. You've seen what I hoped readers would see! It inspires confidence to know that this is being achieved. As one poet to another the aim is to help others to see or feel the message we wish to present. So thank you again. Very best wishes :-D

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 2/12/2024 9:55:00 AM

I enjoyed reading your "Narrow Margin" a wonderful write. "Good Luck" Have a blessed day writing away..........................

Natasha L Scragg
Date: 2/12/2024 2:06:00 PM

Thanks Paula. Look forward to seeing how our fellow Soupers pen to this challenge:-D