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Narrative To Poem, River of Ribbons

Narrative for River Of Ribbons Poem 'The Symphony of the River' I sit, and observe; To the left of me, A large, semi-circle, spreads, into a wide arc, almost to the middle; When, unexpectedly, The East Wind, blows, a short, sharp, gust, And it lifts up, tiny points of steel, that look like a baby hedgehog’s spine; They rise and jump, dancing up and down, Like fluid needle-pins, drawn to an invisible, magnetic, master. At the edge of this frenzy, A smooth, black, shard appears, Stretching, wide, and out, Over-taking the dancers, to finish in an apex, like a piece of broken, black glass; It reflects, the colourless bird, in the damp, grey, clouds. To the right, from the bank, stretching over, to the far side; A narrow ribbon, of luminous, smoke-tinted, satin, almost reaches the opposite bank, Rippling, like a thin, flat, streaming flag. Suddenly, the wind, purposely blows, another gust, Down, and along, the surface, Transforming all into a feathering-fan; Like the murmur of starlings, in joy and at play, And I listen, to the music.

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Date: 7/14/2020 2:01:00 PM
You are a very spiritual, and beautifully constructed person just as you (H)onestly, and (O)pen-mindedly, and ever-(W)illfuly apply yourself towards any efforts that you prescribe for yourself to follow, that all work for another, all-included, for yourself and all life, as well as, for our, "Creator!" "Because, when you believe in something; this all can be anything that consistently works for you individually ("Especially when and if, and just exactly wherever we all can possibly be helpful to another, special, something or someone who are in essence, just like ourselves each individually, and ever-vitally") you; can apply yourself towards this effort with all of your heart and mind, and body; spiritedly, and ever-soulfully as well as emotionally, systematically, and ritualistically." So goes the "Religion" "Universal, a big chunk of truth, not too hard to swallow, not unless, this effort is not followed!"
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Janine Lever
Date: 7/14/2020 2:09:00 PM
Thank you.

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