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Naphthalene Abuela

From the cedar closet she reached for a bundle. Holding her breath, she pushed her head through, pulling down to her torso. Scattering moths as she walked through the hallway Breathing only on the front end of her stride.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 1/16/2016 6:37:00 PM
Teresa, WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you have fun with this wonderful community. You'll find many friendly poets who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I will enjoy following you and your poetry :) We are Lucky To Have you. Enjoy Poetry Soup:) Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@
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Date: 1/16/2016 6:08:00 PM
I kinda wanna know what happens next! Welcome to Poetry Soup Teresa :) And kicking things off with a profound first post indeed. Read, and write. Write to express amazing visions and concepts. Write about anything. Write for you. I look forward to seeing you blossom in this friendly community of poets! Regards, Michael.
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Date: 1/16/2016 5:35:00 PM
Teresa, Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT
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