Nap Time

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Nap Time In the astral world of utterance, one overhears the whispering of sweet nothings, breathlessly whisking up a spell of portioned scents that nay, nearly spilt the teacups swirled cremes delights and demitasse gooey treats, Behold the phoenix rise to full measure under a lunar ecliptic mystic mesmerizing trance, upon a peacocks crown, whose stretched out azure-chartreuse wings, becomes enmeshed betwixt the manes of an unbridled passionate gallop, For it leaped towards a skipping array of a colorful rainbow's path, that was freely dancing throughout its phases within the warmth air of a frozen sky, As it spread o'er a vast terrain of mounds and vales of gathered greens tethered to tawny treasures teeming of life with no end at joyful pleasures, Thus at the behest of Cherubs during the advent of endless stars whose dreamy light twinkles instructions that seduces a flock of whimpering lambs a free ride on their woolly souls, Fostering meek minions to flow in the channels of a righteous domain free of a distant storm pushed by the lashes of sunbeams tickled whips temperate to your hearts enchanted beats that steadies the gauges of innocence, And as a cluster of mirrors enlightened volumes of your sojourned quest of luminous unconscious prominence in a period of this, your inner realm expanse, collectively storing away as romantic muses within the anthology of your memory as its key All delicately locked by the fortuitous magnitude of your eyelids. 2019 May 16 *4th Place* Baby Face What's You THINKIN 2 ~~James Edward Lee Sr.

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Date: 6/4/2019 5:21:00 PM
Like the narrative the voice thanks for your placement in my contest!! Write On James
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Hilo Poet
Date: 6/4/2019 7:29:00 PM
I just hope that I gave babies of that age, poetic justice, of the tender moments largely spent during the time of their lives, with their eyes closed to a world that does not include us, encased within their righteous REM rest, whereto, I believe I have, Aloha William
Date: 6/3/2019 7:38:00 PM
Delightfully magical. Beautiful, William. Bravo. Love it.
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Hilo Poet
Date: 6/4/2019 7:29:00 PM
I just hope that I gave babies of that age, poetic justice, of the tender moments largely spent during the time of their lives, with their eyes closed to a world that does not include us, encased within their righteous REM rest, whereto, I believe I have, Aloha William
Date: 5/18/2019 5:35:00 PM
Well, William, you seem to have what I call 'the power of vocabulary', taming wild words to make them dance as you wish. It reminds me of my best friend from college who had such a skill too-- which I envied.
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Hilo Poet
Date: 5/18/2019 5:50:00 PM
I am humbled by your words, as I extend my courtesies accordingly, my heartfelt thanks indeed, Aloha wk
Date: 5/13/2019 8:58:00 PM
An amazing example for the contest WK. Outstanding! : )
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Hilo Poet
Date: 5/15/2019 6:12:00 PM
Well then, a shout out of ALOHA! to them and welcome--if they're bringing me an A/C unit for my house--by all means welcome--bears repeating! Truly, Aloha wk
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Connie Marcum Wong
Date: 5/15/2019 12:54:00 AM
My daughter and husband and my two seven year old granddaughters are moving to Hilo in July. I live on the Leeward side of Oahu, so I am not looking forward to summer.Aloha : )
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Hilo Poet
Date: 5/13/2019 9:11:00 PM
Tho' James didn't quite have a napping baby pic, I just chose the one with both eyes closed, if not, I'm fine it, mahalo again Connie and thanks for all of your commentary--keeps my mind fresh and cool, against this Hilo heat, UGH!, Aloha wk
Date: 5/9/2019 7:55:00 AM
William, such an array of words within your write, it certainly is sublime and divine and best of luck in the baby face contest and also what a great example for your own contest, hope I can create a poem equally ethereal !
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Hilo Poet
Date: 5/9/2019 9:22:00 AM
I extend my courtesies towards your unique innateness, for I am humbled, Aloha William...
Date: 5/6/2019 2:12:00 PM
Wow! Cosmic cuteness, indeed! An adorable baby placed amidst ethereal, heavenly verse. Nicely done! :) gw
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Date: 5/6/2019 2:24:00 PM
I am humbled coming from you, --a real treat indeed! Aloha William...
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