Home » Poems » Lorenthia Clayton » Nancy, My Friend

Nancy, My Friend

You're kind of silly, and quiet too You smell like chili and bird poo This poem seems mean but its really nice I hear your room is full of mice Your hair is curly like my favorite fries You've got booger brains in your eyes Okay Ill stop now you're really my friend & this poem has come to an end!

Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem. Negative comments will result your account being banned.

Please Login to post a comment

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 1/25/2016 9:53:00 PM

LORENTHIA, THANK YOU for blessing my comment with a reply. THAT WAS NICE OF YOU!!! PD**

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 1/22/2016 11:33:00 PM

Lorenthia WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you have fun with this wonderful community. You'll find many friendly poets who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I will enjoy following you and your poetry :) We are Lucky To Have you. Enjoy Poetry Soup:) Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@

Lorenthia Clayton
Date: 1/23/2016 11:17:00 AM

Thank you for the welcome I will enjoy being here :D

Skat A

Date: 1/22/2016 5:00:00 PM

Weird poem, Lorenthia,, , Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT

Lorenthia Clayton
Date: 1/22/2016 5:43:00 PM

Thank you so much, I was bored at work and my coworker asked me to write a poem about her lol. I have been writing since I was able to write but stopped. So I am getting back to the flow of it all. It just makes me feel so great. I posted my first YouTube video the other day also if you would like to check it out. It's titled Overstand 2 be Understood. -Lore