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Naked Too Late For Contest

Autumn is a thief! She stole my gown of gold
She let it fall gently onto the ground out of my reach!
Naked …I'm totally naked, denuded of my fabulous fallen frock
Now I'm at the mercy of the wild wicked winter winds
I’ll shiver until spring brings me a new dress of vibrant green

Not posted in time for contest

11~13~16

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Jean Murray Date: 11/19/2016 4:13:00 PM Not in time for the contest perhaps, but still in plenty of time for us all to enjoy Jan. Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 11/19/2016 4:24:00 PM Thanks Jean i could kick myself for not submitting it in time:-) hugs jan xx

Barry Stebbings Date: 11/14/2016 8:25:00 AM Interesting take on Personification - Seasons with motivation - I like it. Barry. Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 11/14/2016 10:10:00 AM thanks Barry:-) hugs Jan xx

Alexis Y. Date: 11/14/2016 7:06:00 AM Hi Jan, This is a beautiful personification.Good imagery. Great take on the contest theme. I agree with the others, it read like a winner. A Big seven:-) Alexis Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 11/14/2016 7:16:00 AM Thanks Alexis ... I will never know if Anthony liked it well enough to place but I'm absolutely delighted with the comments I've received:-) hugs jan xx

Demetrios Trifiatis Date: 11/14/2016 5:50:00 AM Delightful and inspiring imagery. Superb writing dear, Jan. A seven! Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 11/14/2016 6:06:00 AM Many thanks Demetrios:-) hugs Jan xx

Probir Gupta Date: 11/14/2016 5:32:00 AM Very nice and inspiring ... Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 11/14/2016 6:06:00 AM Thanks Probir:-) hugs Jan xx

Carol B. Date: 11/13/2016 10:27:00 PM This is fantastic :) Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 11/14/2016 2:12:00 AM Thanks Carol:-):-) hugs Jan xx

Janis Medders Tobechi Date: 11/13/2016 10:17:00 PM It would certainly have been a winner. Great personification. Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 11/14/2016 2:12:00 AM Thanks Janis - I will never know now lol:-) hugs jan xx

Eve Roper Date: 11/13/2016 9:47:00 PM Excellent write, Jan , a winner in my eye :-) Hugs Eve Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 11/14/2016 2:13:00 AM Thanks for your kind comment Eve:-) hugs jan xx

Judy Konos Date: 11/13/2016 5:39:00 PM WOW this is really really good! Congrats Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 11/13/2016 5:47:00 PM Aww thanks so much Judy I was too late for the contest but am delighted I've had such wonderful comments:-) hugs Jan xx

James Peranteau Date: 11/13/2016 4:52:00 PM Believe It or Not Jan... Yesterday Noah and I we're walking through our neighborhood and of course the trees are naked... most of them that is... He calls me over to one of the trees which are still mostly leaves left on the branches to point out this one deformed branch I said, oh now I see it son... he says don't worry pop... Soon when the cold really gets here you'll get a better look at it!. LOL sometimes naked is damn beautiful... Much love, james Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 11/13/2016 5:02:00 PM Thanks James I guess a few trees are desperately trying to hold on to their leaves - many here are bare and it does make me all too aware winter is well and truly on its way:-( hugs Jan xx

Maurice Rigoler Date: 11/13/2016 4:40:00 PM Autumn is beautiful, to be sure, but it's a terrible letdown at the same time! Here where I live most of the leaves have fallen by our seasonal winds and the cold is slowly returning. The malls already are glittering with tacky christmas decorations, trees, and that ubiquitous christmas music. Thanks for stopping by. / M Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 11/13/2016 4:59:00 PM I love this time of year but unfortunatley winter is just around the corner and I hate the cold in fact my thermal vest has made its first outing this week lol:-) Oh I'm sure there's a poem about the tacky side of Christmas just waiting in the wings in your humourous style Maurice! :-) hugs Jan xx

John Lawless Date: 11/13/2016 4:35:00 PM Jan, my neighbors Red Maple just dropped her scarlet robe. Nicely done Jan. Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 11/13/2016 4:56:00 PM Thanks John I do appreciate you taking the time to comment:-) hugs Jan xx

Arthur Vaso Date: 11/13/2016 4:04:00 PM You got me! I was sure this was going to like Viv's, This is a beautiful well written poem! Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 11/13/2016 4:05:00 PM :-):-) that is praise indeed thanks Arthur - I read Viv's poem no way could I compete with humour like that lol:-) hugs Jan xx

Ilene Bauer Date: 11/13/2016 3:18:00 PM i agree with tim - this would have been a winner for sure, jan. (it still is, of course!) Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 11/13/2016 3:19:00 PM Thanks Ilene I'm disappointed I missed the contest but am delighted with the lovely comments I've had so I feel like a winner anyway:-) hugs Jan xx

Tim Smith Date: 11/13/2016 2:00:00 PM This is amazing Jan...too bad it didn't make it in time...it's number one in my book and a fav Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 11/13/2016 2:09:00 PM I'll never know if Anthony would have placed it Tim:-( Am cross with myself for missing out:-( hugs Jan xx

Nette Onclaud Date: 11/13/2016 1:59:00 PM awhhh, so beautiful, jan.. email in a while.. souoie for now..huggs! Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 11/13/2016 2:08:00 PM Thanks Nette I'm cross with myself for missing the contest so i will never know if Anthony would have liked it:-( hugs Jan xx