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Naked Reflections

Naked Reflections No racked babe, but I've had no cut and paste! Like young casabas up front and still 'kewl'! F i n e 'Brick House' (...'more than a mouthful's a waste')! **** compared to a 'forty-dollar mule' With a swing exemplifying my rule! Each lavender curve, smooth as South Sea Pearls Enveloped by trellising golden curls. Body and English, my lingoes in Lit. And tough guys still stammer, week-kneed like girls! Mirror's the same ... reflection's changed a bit. ~by deborah burch© 5/03/2012

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Debbie Guzzi

Date: 7/15/2013 3:59:00 PM

This is a good one to submit to a publisher! Try again let gather 3! Light & Love

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 7/26/2012 1:21:00 PM

This was very rappie! ;) Light & Love

Cecilia Macfarlane

Date: 5/17/2012 7:52:00 PM

A unique and creative write Deborah....congrats on your win. Hugs

Cyndi Macmillan

Date: 5/16/2012 8:05:00 PM

Belated personal congrats on such a great poem. Unique and witty entry and it was my hope that you better able to see how a tweak here and there can settle the dust, so to speak, and make you fall in love with your words all over again. Hugs, chum. I plan to read and comment tonight. But I am seriously wiped out.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 5/11/2012 7:50:00 PM

loved it the first time and congrats on your win!!

Deborah Burch
Date: 5/12/2012 12:25:00 PM

thank you Andrea :) hugss, love ya

Kash Poet

Date: 5/11/2012 7:44:00 PM

Congratulations Deb on your win in Cyndi's contest.Enjoyed the read.

Deborah Burch
Date: 5/12/2012 12:26:00 PM

:) thank you dear Kash!! big hugs, love ya deb

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 5/11/2012 1:29:00 PM

I enjoyed the write..don't know why you added all that to the end. Congrad's on Your win Light & Love

Deborah Burch
Date: 5/12/2012 12:28:00 PM

lol..thank you Debbie...? you mean the Very end? all the explanations? (d/t a comment...just wanted to make sure diversity could understand what was being said) ...thank you, love ya much!!

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 5/11/2012 7:21:00 AM

Congratulations on your win in Cyndi's "Your Birthday Suit" contest Deborah. Love, Carol

Deborah Burch
Date: 5/12/2012 12:30:00 PM

thank you so much Carol...big hugs, love ya...hope you are feeling better :)

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl

Date: 5/11/2012 4:54:00 AM

Congratulations on your birthday suit win Debs xx

Deborah Burch
Date: 5/12/2012 12:31:00 PM

thank you ~GG~ !! big hugs, love ya deb

David Williams

Date: 5/11/2012 2:58:00 AM

hey Cap'n Deb huge congrats on your naked win..David

Deborah Burch
Date: 5/12/2012 12:33:00 PM

lol, thank you so much David...just one of those things I like not to wear ;) big hugs, love ya , cap'n deb lol

Jack Horne

Date: 5/7/2012 9:08:00 AM

love this witty piece - and it's very informative too. i love the mae west quote

Deborah Burch
Date: 5/7/2012 12:20:00 PM

LOL...thank you Jack...yes Mae West had a lot of tongue in cheek quotes that I like too...huggs

Joe Maverick

Date: 5/6/2012 12:13:00 PM

Really well done piece Deborah; this should shine in the contest.."

Deborah Burch
Date: 5/7/2012 12:21:00 PM

thank you Joe so much...:)

John Loving Iii

Date: 5/5/2012 4:06:00 PM

you must be tired. cause you been running around in my mind all day.

Deborah Burch
Date: 5/7/2012 12:22:00 PM

LOL...you're too funny John! ;)

Broken Butterfly

Date: 5/4/2012 6:40:00 PM

How creative Deb, a great entry for the contest, best of luck

Deborah Burch
Date: 5/7/2012 12:22:00 PM

thank you BB :)

Ronny Madonsela

Date: 5/4/2012 2:57:00 PM

deb, this was beautiful. ronny.

Deborah Burch
Date: 5/7/2012 12:23:00 PM

thank you Ronny :)

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 5/4/2012 12:35:00 PM

I enjoyed reading your poetry today and I will be back Monday to read some more. Wishing you a weekend full of love and joy and much much inspiration in your writing endeavors Deborah. Love, Carol

Deborah Burch
Date: 5/7/2012 12:24:00 PM

thank you so much Carol...hugs, love ya deb...your encouragement is so helpful to me always :)

David Williams

Date: 5/4/2012 4:53:00 AM

Deb, Deb, Deb,..you are one kewl gal....love it, best of luck...David

Deborah Burch
Date: 5/7/2012 12:25:00 PM

LOL...thank you David...LOL

Nette Onclaud

Date: 5/4/2012 2:45:00 AM

intriguingly expressed, deborah... your language had both body ( form) and engligh tone ( content).. winning huggs!

Deborah Burch
Date: 5/7/2012 12:26:00 PM

thank you Nette I greatly appreciate your encouragement :)

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 5/3/2012 11:20:00 PM

wow, you got a lot of lingo into this one. Gonna drive someone like Kashinath crazy trying to figure it out. ME LIKES. One of the best of the birthday suit poems!

Deborah Burch
Date: 5/4/2012 12:00:00 AM

*blush* lol thank you dear Andrea...your kindness and encouragement really means a lot to me! Thank you. love, ya deb