Deborah Burch Poet Dizain

Naked Reflections

Naked Reflections

No racked babe, but I've had no cut and paste!
Like young casabas up front and still 'kewl'!
F i n e 'Brick House' (...'more than a mouthful's a waste')!
**** compared to a 'forty-dollar mule'
With a swing exemplifying my rule!
Each lavender curve, smooth as South Sea Pearls
Enveloped by trellising golden curls.
Body and English, my lingoes in Lit.
And tough guys still stammer, week-kneed  like girls!

Mirror's the same ... reflection's changed a bit.


~by deborah burch©
5/03/2012

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Debbie Guzzi July 15, 2013 at 3:59 PM This is a good one to submit to a publisher! Try again let gather 3! Light & Love

Debbie Guzzi July 26, 2012 at 1:21 PM This was very rappie! ;) Light & Love

Cecilia Macfarlane May 17, 2012 at 7:52 PM A unique and creative write Deborah....congrats on your win. Hugs

Cyndi Macmillan May 16, 2012 at 8:05 PM Belated personal congrats on such a great poem. Unique and witty entry and it was my hope that you better able to see how a tweak here and there can settle the dust, so to speak, and make you fall in love with your words all over again. Hugs, chum. I plan to read and comment tonight. But I am seriously wiped out.

Andrea Dietrich May 11, 2012 at 7:50 PM loved it the first time and congrats on your win!! Deborah Burch May 12, 2012 at 12:25 PM thank you Andrea :) hugss, love ya

Kash Poet May 11, 2012 at 7:44 PM Congratulations Deb on your win in Cyndi's contest.Enjoyed the read. Deborah Burch May 12, 2012 at 12:26 PM :) thank you dear Kash!! big hugs, love ya deb

Debbie Guzzi May 11, 2012 at 1:29 PM I enjoyed the write..don't know why you added all that to the end. Congrad's on Your win Light & Love Deborah Burch May 12, 2012 at 12:28 PM lol..thank you Debbie...? you mean the Very end? all the explanations? (d/t a comment...just wanted to make sure diversity could understand what was being said) ...thank you, love ya much!!

Carol Sunshine Brown May 11, 2012 at 7:21 AM Congratulations on your win in Cyndi's "Your Birthday Suit" contest Deborah. Love, Carol Deborah Burch May 12, 2012 at 12:30 PM thank you so much Carol...big hugs, love ya...hope you are feeling better :)

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl May 11, 2012 at 4:54 AM Congratulations on your birthday suit win Debs xx Deborah Burch May 12, 2012 at 12:31 PM thank you ~GG~ !! big hugs, love ya deb

David Williams May 11, 2012 at 2:58 AM hey Cap'n Deb huge congrats on your naked win..David Deborah Burch May 12, 2012 at 12:33 PM lol, thank you so much David...just one of those things I like not to wear ;) big hugs, love ya , cap'n deb lol

Jack Horne May 7, 2012 at 9:08 AM love this witty piece - and it's very informative too. i love the mae west quote Deborah Burch May 7, 2012 at 12:20 PM LOL...thank you Jack...yes Mae West had a lot of tongue in cheek quotes that I like too...huggs

Joe Maverick May 6, 2012 at 12:13 PM Really well done piece Deborah; this should shine in the contest.." Deborah Burch May 7, 2012 at 12:21 PM thank you Joe so much...:)

Broken Butterfly May 4, 2012 at 6:40 PM How creative Deb, a great entry for the contest, best of luck Deborah Burch May 7, 2012 at 12:22 PM thank you BB :)

Ronny Madonsela May 4, 2012 at 2:57 PM deb, this was beautiful. ronny. Deborah Burch May 7, 2012 at 12:23 PM thank you Ronny :)

Carol Sunshine Brown May 4, 2012 at 12:35 PM I enjoyed reading your poetry today and I will be back Monday to read some more. Wishing you a weekend full of love and joy and much much inspiration in your writing endeavors Deborah. Love, Carol Deborah Burch May 7, 2012 at 12:24 PM thank you so much Carol...hugs, love ya deb...your encouragement is so helpful to me always :)

David Williams May 4, 2012 at 4:53 AM Deb, Deb, Deb,..you are one kewl gal....love it, best of luck...David Deborah Burch May 7, 2012 at 12:25 PM LOL...thank you David...LOL

Nette Onclaud May 4, 2012 at 2:45 AM intriguingly expressed, deborah... your language had both body ( form) and engligh tone ( content).. winning huggs! Deborah Burch May 7, 2012 at 12:26 PM thank you Nette I greatly appreciate your encouragement :)

Andrea Dietrich May 3, 2012 at 11:20 PM wow, you got a lot of lingo into this one. Gonna drive someone like Kashinath crazy trying to figure it out. ME LIKES. One of the best of the birthday suit poems! Deborah Burch May 4, 2012 at 12:00 AM *blush* lol thank you dear Andrea...your kindness and encouragement really means a lot to me! Thank you. love, ya deb