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Naked

Weeping willow tree, you sob bitter tears when autumn steals your clothes.

Contest Monoku Madness
Sponsored by John Hamilton

08~18~16

humorousseasonstreemonoku

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Laura Leiser

August 26, 2016 at 11:20 PM

Wonderful Monoku, Jan! Congrats on your top win:)

Jan Allison

August 27, 2016 at 11:41 AM

Thanks so much Laura:-) hugs Jan xx

Mark Paul Van Der Merwe

August 24, 2016 at 3:51 AM

Fantastic write Jan - beautifully put - congratulations Mark

Jan Allison

August 24, 2016 at 7:55 AM

Glad you enjoyed it Mark:-) hugs Jan xx

Kim Rodrigues

August 23, 2016 at 10:53 PM

Wow! Great visual!

Jan Allison

August 24, 2016 at 7:55 AM

Thanks Kim:-) Hugs Jan xx

Greg Hoffman

August 23, 2016 at 8:59 PM

Excellent monoku Jan and congrats on your top win

Jan Allison

August 24, 2016 at 7:54 AM

Thanks Greg:-) Hugs Jan xx

Joseph May

August 23, 2016 at 8:54 PM

Congrats on your top win Jan

Jan Allison

August 24, 2016 at 7:54 AM

Thanks Joseph:-) Hugs Jan xx

Beautiful Scars

August 23, 2016 at 4:01 PM

Congrats on your top placement lovely lady! :)-luloo

Jan Allison

August 23, 2016 at 6:15 PM

Many thanks LuLoo:-) hugs Jan xx

Seren Roberts

August 23, 2016 at 12:55 AM

Wow Jan a worthy top place.....Seren

Jan Allison

August 23, 2016 at 1:57 AM

Thanks Seren - I don't just write poop poems lol:-) hugs Jan xx

Agnes Krampe

August 22, 2016 at 8:35 PM

Congrats on your win, Jan.

Jan Allison

August 23, 2016 at 1:56 AM

Thanks Agnes:-) hugs Jan xx

Sara Chansarkar

August 22, 2016 at 9:34 AM

Poor naked willow!Admire your humor Jan and congrats on your top place!

Jan Allison

August 22, 2016 at 9:53 AM

John asked for humour .. I am delighted he liked my poem so much:-) hugs Jan xx

Connie Marcum Wong

August 22, 2016 at 6:52 AM

I am so glad he loved it too Jan. Big congrats! Awesome first place! 7 ; )

Jan Allison

August 22, 2016 at 9:53 AM

Thanks Connie:-) hugs Jan xx

Afzal Nusker

August 22, 2016 at 4:18 AM

Quite a humour. Congratulations for the win, Jan.

Jan Allison

August 22, 2016 at 9:53 AM

Thanks Afzal:-) hugs Jan xx

Just James

August 22, 2016 at 1:18 AM

Fabulous win! Well done

Jan Allison

August 22, 2016 at 9:54 AM

Thanks so much James:-) hugs Jan xx

Sunita U.D Palawon

August 21, 2016 at 10:49 PM

Congrats Jan on your top 1st place with this moving line. Love Sunita :)

Jan Allison

August 22, 2016 at 9:54 AM

Thanks for dropping by Sunita:-) hugs Jan xx

Janis Medders Tobechi

August 21, 2016 at 10:48 PM

Beautiful win.....

Jan Allison

August 22, 2016 at 9:55 AM

Thanks Janis:-) hugs Jan xx

Ironic Zink

August 21, 2016 at 8:54 PM

Nice win Jan!

Jan Allison

August 22, 2016 at 9:55 AM

Thanks so much:-) hugs Jan xx

Eve Roper

August 21, 2016 at 8:43 PM

Oh perfect monoku, Congratulations on your win. Hugs Eve

Jan Allison

August 22, 2016 at 9:55 AM

Thanks so much Eve:-) hugs Jan xx

Andrea Dietrich

August 21, 2016 at 8:10 PM

WAY to go, JAn. Top of the podium!!

Jan Allison

August 22, 2016 at 9:56 AM

For a writer of poop poems I'm not doing too badly lol:-) hugs Jan xx

Sandra Haight

August 21, 2016 at 7:20 PM

Jan, congratulations on your 1st Place win in the Monoku contest! Great imagery! Hugs, Sandra

Jan Allison

August 22, 2016 at 9:56 AM

Thanks Sandra:-) hugs Jan xx

Ronald Kent

August 21, 2016 at 6:33 PM

Nice write and congrats on the win.

Jan Allison

August 22, 2016 at 9:56 AM

Thanks Ronald:-) hugs Jan xx

Sonia Walker

August 21, 2016 at 5:55 PM

Jan, congratulations on your top billing. A delightful Monoku to read. ~ Sonia

Jan Allison

August 22, 2016 at 9:57 AM

Many thanks Sonia I am delighted to place so well:-) hugs Jan xx

Paul Callus

August 21, 2016 at 5:01 PM

Back with congratulations, Jan....another superb first place!! Hugs // paul

Jan Allison

August 21, 2016 at 5:10 PM

Thanks Paul I'm so glad John liked it:-) hugs Jan xx

Alexis Y.

August 21, 2016 at 4:22 PM

Hi Jan, This was good! Congratulations on your top win. It was well deserved:-) Alexis

Jan Allison

August 21, 2016 at 5:10 PM

Thanks Alexis I'm delighted to place so well in the contest:-) hugs Jan xx

John Hamilton

August 21, 2016 at 3:52 PM

This was perfect! Congrats on the great win!

Jan Allison

August 21, 2016 at 4:03 PM

WOW John I am delighted to place so well:-):-) thank you so much:-) hugs Jan xx

Agnes Krampe

August 21, 2016 at 3:35 PM

I love this, Jan! Agnes

Jan Allison

August 21, 2016 at 4:04 PM

Thanks so much Agnes:-) hugs Jan xx

Vladislav Raven

August 20, 2016 at 9:11 AM

Hi Jan, a most sincere and beautiful write from your pen. This is such a gentle Monou. Well written Jan. A Monoku with such wonderful content. Your words sing as always Jan. This is a definite seven. Hugs....Mike. XX

Jan Allison

August 20, 2016 at 9:37 AM

Thanks as ever for your continued support Mike:-) hugs Jan xx

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