Naive Autumn

The summer specter like wild parrots squawked,
in piercing jade abandon did it fly.
Through rampant trees of emerald we stalked
the sun's medallion in a cyan sky,

while ginger cobblestones the path did make
of fallen leaves in late September's scope,
the sheen of amber sparks from which we'd rake
the kiss of maples in our sleeveless hope.

In bronze delicious fire we'd ever cling;
December's frozen heart was but a ruse,
sweet cider fountains would each morning bring
us china cups of burning golden hues.

To marigold horizons did we dream
as unseen alders bled their crimson screams.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017



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Date: 5/30/2019 3:49:00 AM
Oh, this is an ideal autumn. And fave.
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Dale Gregory Cozart
Date: 5/30/2019 8:20:00 AM
Thanks very much, Kurt.
Date: 9/11/2018 8:26:00 PM
Congrats on your win, Dale.
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Dale Gregory Cozart
Date: 9/11/2018 9:03:00 PM
Thanks, Line!
Date: 9/11/2018 7:54:00 PM
The 2nd, 3rd and last stanza of this poem are absolute gold with perfect meter and breathtaking imagery. I was glad to highlight this poem in my top 10 as it is certainly deserving of some appreciation.
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Dale Gregory Cozart
Date: 9/11/2018 9:03:00 PM
Thanks so much, Jesse.
Date: 10/5/2017 10:13:00 AM
Great iambic pentameter Shakespearean sonnet :) But that aside. I love all the colors in your poem, how the whole spectrum of autumn passes us by. Lovely.
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Dale Gregory Cozart
Date: 10/5/2017 10:16:00 AM
Thanks, Darren!
Date: 10/4/2017 7:43:00 PM
Impressive sonnet, Dale.
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Dale Gregory Cozart
Date: 10/5/2017 10:16:00 AM
Thanks a lot, Daniel!
Date: 10/4/2017 4:02:00 PM
Well done Dale! Beautiful and enjoyable :)
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Dale Gregory Cozart
Date: 10/4/2017 4:38:00 PM
Thanks, Heidi!
Date: 10/4/2017 2:52:00 PM
Spectacular, colorful imagery, Dale! Your weaving of metaphoric tapestry is superb. Wonderful poetry. Love and peace always.
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Dale Gregory Cozart
Date: 10/4/2017 3:01:00 PM
Thanks so much, Freddie!
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