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Nailed Truth

Opening the door to Pandora’s box where chaos descends
As the wickedness of the locusts descends upon this world 
giving birth unto passions that have no heavenly equity 

Craftily-constructed plausibility draws away the inexperienced mind
held captive within the wounds of prejudice that are licked by a splintered tongue 
while our Lord patiently awaits with outstretched loving arms pierced deeply

Vain genealogies born of arrogance in an allure to the simple minded 
unable to distinguish evil falsehoods from truth they stumble on nevertheless 
brass mixed with sliver shines falsely bright to the deceiver and deceived 

Error in judgement their blasphemous and impious opinions spread venomously
In an allure of reality where more true than then truth itself beckons mendaciously 
souls of Our Savior colourless in creation for the divinity of heaven is not of this earth

Almighty transparency transcends in all earthly traits eclipsing a complete deceit  
His Excellency most sublime radiant Gem gleams of eternity for all mankind
Whom when asked gives the Precious gift of His Blood through Grace unconditionally

a co written piece by Donna Loughman and liam mc daid

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018




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Date: 1/15/2018 2:58:00 PM
A powerful piece of prose...impressive writing. Nicely penned! My best regards. :) john
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Date: 1/15/2018 12:46:00 AM
- A poem of a powerful truth, Liam & Donna - Well done - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Donna Loughman
Date: 1/16/2018 9:19:00 AM
Thank you Anne-Lise for your comment:-) Have a blessed day!
Date: 1/14/2018 4:35:00 PM
Such a joy to read on a Sunday afternoon. Thanks to the two of you.
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Donna Loughman
Date: 1/16/2018 9:17:00 AM
Thank you for your lovely comment! Have a blessed day!
Date: 1/14/2018 3:22:00 PM
Thank you for sharing ink with me Liam on this tribute to our Lord....as always it’s an honor! :-)
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