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Chicago:  I grew up in the shadow of the stockyards, in a mauling, brauling city.  And now...

 

Once "City of Big Shoulders," Stockyards and industrial concerns: A man's self-worth measured By muscle and energy burned. Today the stockyards are shuttered, The Face of Livelihoods changed; From Meat-packing and Manufacturing--- To Financial Services and Video Games. Serving loyally with blind dedication, Following only a high school education, Lifetime stints at one factory or plant, Today simply ain't where it's at: Mere shards of memory Of what life was before Everyone had a college degree, And sought work in a plush office indoors, As opposed to lifting heavy two-by-fours. Looking back at Chicago's history Over the last century, Our task is this simple question to ask: Have we moved ahead and progressed? Are our lives any better? Or have we reversed and regressed--- Spending the prime of our lives studying letters? It's easy to end a poem on such a note, Leave the reader to cast his or her vote; But I'll not finish off with a nod a wink, I'll let you know what I actually think: Chicago was rough, Chicago was tough, Her denizens coarse and gruff; Not much for culture or fashion, Artists and poets she was constantly bashin.' Workingmen reveled in their muscles, Frequently engaging in tussles With their bosses over hours and wages, Oft-ending in fisticuffed rages--- And the workers sentenced to 6' x 8' cages. Gangsters like Capone and Dillinger flourished, By slimy politicos encouraged To extort and shake down Workingmen all over town, At deserted sites with nary a copper around. Sometimes we look back and forget how it was, When education and the arts were slighted, And even good neighborhoods were blighted: Where an ugly picture emerges Of exploitation and funeral dirges. So let us be grateful for what we have in some precincts today, And hope that Chicago's future points to an even brighter day.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018




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Date: 3/15/2019 4:14:00 PM
Hi Gershon! I do love so this poem! It's a quick snap of the Chicago history you knew and know now. Haikus are great, but for me this is the steak, not the appetizer.-)) It grounds me in your experience. You are more than bright. Tell us more)) Ex-Chicagoan Love you....Panagiota
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 3/16/2019 10:51:00 PM
Oh, Panagiota, your (too) kind words have made my evening... I was just thinking of writing another Chicago poem soon, and now I will, and I will dedicate it to you! Poetry hugs, my friend. Best wishes, Gershon
Date: 3/15/2019 11:39:00 AM
Good poem good and bad of American life, Like the big shoulders, seems like we need both without Capone or anything like him. Grandfather was in steel works, husband computer software. I thought your poem was quite good and good rhyming.
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 3/15/2019 3:43:00 PM
Linda, your view, your feedback, and your encouragement are greatly appreciated. I'd kind of given up writing 'longer poems' a while back... Maybe I'll give it another spin now once in a while... And, btw, which steel works was your grandfather in? --- I knew them well... Thanks again. Best wishes, Gershon
Date: 3/15/2019 9:38:00 AM
Glad to see this wise and optimistic poem featured. I especially like the 5th stanza, —the way you step through the fourth wall, with flourish :)
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Date: 3/15/2019 3:41:00 PM
Thanks a lot for viewing this and for your feedback! I wrote a lot of poems like this 'early on,' and the lack of reaction back then discouraged me from continuing on in that vein---not that all (my) poems need to be so long and drawn-out, but now I seems to be "stuck on short." Thanks for the encouragement. Maybe I can try a long one once in a while. :) gw

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