Mythical

I once wrote of lovely mermaid's song,
many years ago, yet still I long
to hear her haunting voice once again,
music of waves never reaching end.

Days I walk a lonely beach once more
searching for her on a distant shore.
Perhaps you're given only one chance
to capture a mermaid in your glance.

She was so lovely, I could but stare
as she braided sunbeams in her hair.
A gentle song she sang to the waves.
Perhaps they too had become her slaves.

Her vassal I could most proudly be
but, alas, she has no need of me.
I feel it useless, yet still I long
for a single note of mermaid's song.

Fables are spun of creatures like she
an enigma dwelling in the sea.
You may think my tale impossible,
truthfully, it's mythological!

March 18, 2023
for "Word Challenge--M Words
by Constance La France
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Kauffman Avatar
April 7, 2023 at 9:53 AM
Ann, back with congratulations for your win with your delightful mermaid! Easter blessings!
La France Avatar
April 3, 2023 at 5:07 AM
Ann, wonderful writing and thank you for sharing your poem with us in my Writing Challenge congratulations !
Andresen Avatar
March 21, 2023 at 11:10 AM
- Congratulations on your lovely poem, Ann ... I haven't seen her ... but would love to :) - hugs
Goldsmith Avatar
March 21, 2023 at 10:24 AM
Back with Congratulations on your win. A very creative write. I enjoyed reading it again. Have a great/blessed day writing away...........
Bueckert Avatar
March 21, 2023 at 9:55 AM
"an enigma dwelling in the sea" I love this line, great poem and story, congrats to you :)
Fowler Avatar
March 21, 2023 at 8:10 AM
This is beautiful Ann. I love it! Congratulations! :)
Peck Avatar
April 11, 2023 at 9:14 AM
Thank you, Linda! If the tale were but true!
Buhagiar Avatar
March 19, 2023 at 12:36 PM
I love mermaids even if they don't exist.
Peck Avatar
March 19, 2023 at 1:51 PM
I love them, too. So, I pretend they exist but are very good at hiding. :)
Rodrigues Avatar
March 19, 2023 at 11:51 AM
Love this write! …yet still I long to hear her haunting voice once again, music of waves never reaching end and I feel it useless, yet still I long for a single note of mermaid's song. Lovely imagery!
Peck Avatar
March 19, 2023 at 1:53 PM
Thank you so much, Kim. I love myths and wish this one was true. :)
Goldsmith Avatar
March 18, 2023 at 12:08 PM
A fun write. Good Luck. Have a great/blessed day..................
Peck Avatar
March 18, 2023 at 3:07 PM
Thanks, dear Paula!
Kauffman Avatar
March 18, 2023 at 9:47 AM
All the wonderful myth and mystery of a mythological enigma in your delightful, yet pensive, poem Ann. I see your heart has been captured by a mermaid's song. The lines and delightful images flow like waves to the shore. So charming! Best wishes for the contest. Blessings!
Peck Avatar
March 18, 2023 at 10:12 AM
Thank you so much, Sam! I'm enchanted by mermaids and all things mysterious. :)
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