Mystique

An agefull timeless sunless sea,
Is here beneath the mountains deep,
As still and cold as snow-clad peaks,
Its weight is rest on rock and stone,
In basin cleft, o’er hillside scree!
In burnished indigo, it sleeps,
The hand of time has swept its face
A million times and leaves no trace,
Here times great echo,
And silent tales,
Not mankind’s fearful raucous rage,
Here passing day is not pursued,
In peace suffused indigo blue.



© Joe Maverick 12-7-2009
		     29-8-2010
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Austin Avatar
August 23, 2012 at 10:23 AM
This indigo blue sounds like a vision I used to have in contemplation, a condition without form or substance. Anywho, I like this one mucho, Joe. Love, daver
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August 23, 2012 at 10:24 AM
Whoops! Misread my laptop. daver
Austin Avatar
August 23, 2012 at 10:23 AM
This indigo blue sounds like a vision I used to have in contemplation, a condition without form or substance. Anywho, I like this one mucho, Joe. Love, daver
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July 9, 2012 at 11:56 AM
Feels like falling into the sky and landing on the clouds, is the best fall ever, Joe! "Burnished indigo"...lots of cool metaphor and imagery happening here, Joe!! Have a great day! Love, Mikki
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March 15, 2011 at 6:02 AM
Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week Joe. Have a wonderful week and may you have baskets full of inspiration come your way. Love, Carol
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March 14, 2011 at 7:41 AM
Congratulations Joe, on your featured poem this week on the soup,
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March 13, 2011 at 5:17 PM
Congrats Joe on your featured poem this week on the Soup.. wonderful words to share with us all my friend with luv..
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November 8, 2010 at 3:34 PM
Mountain colors are so beautiful...I enjoyed reading this one today..I am so glad that I chose this to read this eve..Your comments on my work were very touching..Sara
Brown Avatar
September 14, 2010 at 3:52 PM
I enjoyed reading your poetry today Joe. I am looking forward to tomorrow and what I might read of yours again. Never let your pen lay and dry out. The best to you in your writing endeavors whatever they may be. Love, Carol
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