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Mystique

Oh, thou art of the greatest mystery, an enigma of time and place and space flitting with ethereal quality. Mind not paling stars that surround this place. They languish in comparison to thee, whose soul reflects from thy radiant face.

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Date: 11/17/2023 5:55:00 PM
I think of you sitting in the peace of the night under a star studded sky composing this beautiful poem Las. Its spiritual and calming, and so definitely, undeniably created by you Well done. Best wishes from Ssvie.
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Linda Alice Fowler
Date: 11/18/2023 8:12:00 AM
You are too kind to me my friend. Thank you Svvie! :)
Date: 11/16/2023 1:25:00 AM
There is a lyrical tone to this poem. Beautifully writ. Blessings.
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Linda Alice Fowler
Date: 11/18/2023 8:11:00 AM
Thank you dear Victor. hugs :)
Date: 11/15/2023 4:03:00 PM
This is beautiful, Linda
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Linda Alice Fowler
Date: 11/15/2023 4:27:00 PM
Many thanks Andrea. :)
Date: 11/15/2023 1:17:00 PM
Awe-some composition, Linda. One can orchestrate it harmoniously to a suite that proffers the multitude who ambles their way through this magical tour conveyed, to enrichments that opportune a cessation from the ills of life and embrace the realization and wholesomeness that surrounds them. Exceptionally written in such a short form, my friend. Aloha, William
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Linda Alice Fowler
Date: 11/15/2023 4:26:00 PM
Dear William, thank you so much for visiting and leaving such a stellar review of this poem. Aloha dear friend :)
Date: 11/15/2023 7:16:00 AM
Linda, your poem is a captivating exploration of the enigmatic nature of existence. Your verses weave a mesmerizing patch of time, place, and space, with each line radiating the beauty of the soul. The rhythm and rhyme scheme lends a timeless quality to your words, creating a piece that resonates with theme long after the final line. A truly mystical piece! -Blessings, Daniel
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Linda Alice Fowler
Date: 11/15/2023 4:23:00 PM
i thank you for your visit and read of my poem Daniel. Your thoughtful words brighten my heart. blessings and friendly hugs, :)
Date: 11/14/2023 3:56:00 PM
Lovely sestet. You have captured the essence of Audrey Hepburn. She really carried this alluring mystique about her. Enjoyed. SuZ
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Linda Alice Fowler
Date: 11/14/2023 6:05:00 PM
Hi SuZ. Nice to have you visit and leave such sweet and thoughtful comments. She really was elegance in motion. I'm glad you enjoyed it. :)
Date: 11/14/2023 12:57:00 PM
O, how so beautiful a poem, Linda. Much enjoyed!
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Linda Alice Fowler
Date: 11/14/2023 6:03:00 PM
Thank you my friend Vijay. Always pleased to have you visit. Glad you enjoyed. :)
Date: 11/14/2023 12:49:00 PM
Ahhh!! Very romantic is this one. Way to go. I enjoyed reading it today. Thank you for sharing and for dropping by my pages. Sara K
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Linda Alice Fowler
Date: 11/14/2023 6:03:00 PM
Hello dear Sara. Nice to see you again. I am glad you enjoyed this romantic read. Always a pleasure to read your work. Thank you! :)
Date: 11/14/2023 11:25:00 AM
Wow, this is lovely, Alice:)
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Linda Alice Fowler
Date: 11/14/2023 11:47:00 AM
Thank you dear Daniel. A sestet...I thought about writing the whole sonnet; maybe someday. :)
Date: 11/13/2023 4:17:00 PM
A FAV for my list, Linda. Perfect title and enjoyable poetry to follow it. Excellent!!! smiles ~ Blessings Bill
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Linda Alice Fowler
Date: 11/13/2023 4:51:00 PM
A fav - wow! Thank you Bill. I am honored. :)
Date: 11/13/2023 3:10:00 PM
indeed a beautiful and 'soulful' poem. I love the aura of subtle mystery until the very last line. Well done, Linda. Have a great evening, Sara
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Linda Alice Fowler
Date: 11/13/2023 4:48:00 PM
Hi Sara. Thank you for the lovely words about my poem. Enjoy your evening as well. :)

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