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Mystique

Oh, thou art of the greatest mystery,
an enigma of time and place and space
flitting with ethereal quality.
Mind not paling stars that surround this place.
They languish in comparison to thee,
whose soul reflects from thy radiant face.

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Speaks Volumes

November 17, 2023 at 5:55 PM

I think of you sitting in the peace of the night under a star studded sky composing this beautiful poem Las. Its spiritual and calming, and so definitely, undeniably created by you Well done. Best wishes from Ssvie.

Linda Alice Fowler

November 18, 2023 at 8:12 AM

You are too kind to me my friend. Thank you Svvie! :)

Victor Buhagiar

November 16, 2023 at 1:25 AM

There is a lyrical tone to this poem. Beautifully writ. Blessings.

Linda Alice Fowler

November 18, 2023 at 8:11 AM

Thank you dear Victor. hugs :)

Andrea Dietrich

November 15, 2023 at 4:03 PM

This is beautiful, Linda

Linda Alice Fowler

November 15, 2023 at 4:27 PM

Many thanks Andrea. :)

William Kelii Kekaula

November 15, 2023 at 1:17 PM

Awe-some composition, Linda. One can orchestrate it harmoniously to a suite that proffers the multitude who ambles their way through this magical tour conveyed, to enrichments that opportune a cessation from the ills of life and embrace the realization and wholesomeness that surrounds them. Exceptionally written in such a short form, my friend. Aloha, William

Linda Alice Fowler

November 15, 2023 at 4:26 PM

Dear William, thank you so much for visiting and leaving such a stellar review of this poem. Aloha dear friend :)

Daniel Henry Rodgers

November 15, 2023 at 7:16 AM

Linda, your poem is a captivating exploration of the enigmatic nature of existence. Your verses weave a mesmerizing patch of time, place, and space, with each line radiating the beauty of the soul. The rhythm and rhyme scheme lends a timeless quality to your words, creating a piece that resonates with theme long after the final line. A truly mystical piece! -Blessings, Daniel

Linda Alice Fowler

November 15, 2023 at 4:23 PM

i thank you for your visit and read of my poem Daniel. Your thoughtful words brighten my heart. blessings and friendly hugs, :)