Mystical Ocean

Who can resist the call of ocean waves
whispering as they lap against the shore?
Who can stand firm against that which enslaves?
Return passionate melody ardor?

How many men have heard the Sirens’ song
leaving wondering kith and ken behind?
How did their fateful journey hold so long
to oppress their minds and tighten the bind?

Who can repeat sweet nothings of wafture
that solos its secret, seductive song?
Who can resist the traction of rigor
that intones one’s soul to follow along?

Can from the heights of Icarus one dive
to the depths of Poseidon and survive ?
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023

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Ashley Avatar
September 22, 2023 at 5:37 PM
Oh my, dear Linda, your sonnet is steeped in dynamic beauty, passion, a sparkle of alliteration and the drama of your amazing couplet for a grand finale. Plus, I just adore the use of the word "wafture" - so very poetic! Enchanting and exquisite! Warmest wishes my friend.. ~Susan
Fowler Avatar
September 23, 2023 at 6:32 AM
Hello sweet Susan. Your words are always so kind and supportive. I truly appreciate you! :)
Baker Avatar
September 22, 2023 at 2:52 PM
An unexplainable mystery for sure, Linda. You did a good job of covering the spectrum of feelings one deals with when the sirens sing. Thanks for sharing your thoughts with us though your fine poetry. Bill
Fowler Avatar
September 22, 2023 at 4:03 PM
Howdy Bill. Many thanks for your supportive and encouraging words. :)
Buhagiar Avatar
September 21, 2023 at 8:19 AM
What a charming sonnet. Indeed who can resist the call of the sea or ocean? Great sonnet.
Fowler Avatar
September 22, 2023 at 4:02 PM
Thanks Victor. Your comments mean a lot. hugs :)
Volumes Avatar
September 21, 2023 at 8:08 AM
This is so well written. Perfectly descriptive. Thought provoking to read. to read. Well done my friend. Loved it.
Fowler Avatar
September 22, 2023 at 4:02 PM
Thanks Svvie my friend. Hope you're ready for your visitors! Have fun! :)
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