Mystical Ocean

Who can resist the call of ocean waves
whispering as they lap against the shore?
Who can stand firm against that which enslaves?
Return passionate melody ardor?

How many men have heard the Sirens’ song
leaving wondering kith and ken behind?
How did their fateful journey hold so long
to oppress their minds and tighten the bind?

Who can repeat sweet nothings of wafture
that solos its secret, seductive song?
Who can resist the traction of rigor
that intones one’s soul to follow along?

Can from the heights of Icarus one dive
to the depths of Poseidon and survive ?

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Date: 9/22/2023 5:37:00 PM
Oh my, dear Linda, your sonnet is steeped in dynamic beauty, passion, a sparkle of alliteration and the drama of your amazing couplet for a grand finale. Plus, I just adore the use of the word "wafture" - so very poetic! Enchanting and exquisite! Warmest wishes my friend.. ~Susan
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Linda Alice Fowler
Date: 9/23/2023 6:32:00 AM
Hello sweet Susan. Your words are always so kind and supportive. I truly appreciate you! :)
Date: 9/22/2023 2:52:00 PM
An unexplainable mystery for sure, Linda. You did a good job of covering the spectrum of feelings one deals with when the sirens sing. Thanks for sharing your thoughts with us though your fine poetry. Bill
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Linda Alice Fowler
Date: 9/22/2023 4:03:00 PM
Howdy Bill. Many thanks for your supportive and encouraging words. :)
Date: 9/21/2023 8:19:00 AM
What a charming sonnet. Indeed who can resist the call of the sea or ocean? Great sonnet.
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Linda Alice Fowler
Date: 9/22/2023 4:02:00 PM
Thanks Victor. Your comments mean a lot. hugs :)
Date: 9/21/2023 8:08:00 AM
This is so well written. Perfectly descriptive. Thought provoking to read. to read. Well done my friend. Loved it.
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Linda Alice Fowler
Date: 9/22/2023 4:02:00 PM
Thanks Svvie my friend. Hope you're ready for your visitors! Have fun! :)
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