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Mystical Midnight

Unseen reunited Mystical midnight matters Moment of learning Looking outwardly Missing for someone who left Drowned while hold last breathe Night full of wonders Touched our enormous feelings Shown us the best way So lucky are we Midnight wind blowing so cold Wonderful moment Were alone but free Distance defy our senses Momentary creed Hearing pleasantly Beside the whispering waves Refreshing our wit Here we are tonight Feel the ocean breeze awake Discernment takes place Lost and weary soul Waiting to be enlightened Grateful while glaring

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Constance La France

Date: 7/4/2015 11:56:00 AM

Marvin, wonderful that you teach your students haiku , a great way for them to learn poetry 7 and thanks for visiting my senryu 12

Marvin G. Celestial
Date: 7/4/2015 10:43:00 PM

Yes! Great my friend!

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 10/26/2014 4:20:00 AM

- Wooow ... Your Haikus "mystical midnight" is amazing! - Really well conducted ??... love all together - // Anne-Lise :)

Marvin G. Celestial
Date: 10/26/2014 4:37:00 AM

Me and my students wrote them my friend. I made them an instant poets at once! LOL! I did a lecture - workshop how to tap their higher self and channel wisdom. They were successful! Another stunned them, they saw a ghost for the first time!

Jan Allison

Date: 8/14/2014 2:35:00 PM

fabulous sting of Haiku - I struggle writing one - these are simply stunning! Hugs jan xx

Marvin G. Celestial
Date: 8/14/2014 7:09:00 PM

Great Jan! Just do mental wandering and you will be stunned after! You will write your own string of HAIKUs...

Verlena S. Walker

Date: 8/10/2014 7:03:00 PM

Nicely done Marvin... You have a golden thumb with this form... Enjoyed... Verlena

Marvin G. Celestial
Date: 8/10/2014 7:23:00 PM

Thank you for the compliment Verlena! I hold a Mind Developement lecture on "Understanding Chakra." One of the topics was to tap the creative mind to write a poem. GREAT!

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 8/8/2014 6:18:00 AM

Nice string of haiku on happiness, marvin

Marvin G. Celestial
Date: 8/8/2014 11:13:00 AM

Thank you dr ram!