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Mystical Midnight

Unseen reunited
Mystical midnight matters
Moment of learning

Looking outwardly
Missing for someone who left
Drowned while hold last breathe

Night full of wonders 
Touched our enormous feelings
Shown us the best way

So lucky are we
Midnight wind blowing so cold
Wonderful moment

Were alone but free
Distance defy our senses
Momentary creed

Hearing pleasantly
Beside the whispering waves 
Refreshing our wit

Here we are tonight
Feel the ocean breeze awake
Discernment takes place

Lost and weary soul
Waiting to be  enlightened
Grateful while glaring

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Constance La France

Date: 7/4/2015 11:56:00 AM

Marvin, wonderful that you teach your students haiku , a great way for them to learn poetry 7 and thanks for visiting my senryu 12

Marvin G. Celestial
Date: 7/4/2015 10:43:00 PM

Yes! Great my friend!

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 10/26/2014 4:20:00 AM

- Wooow ... Your Haikus "mystical midnight" is amazing! - Really well conducted ??... love all together - // Anne-Lise :)

Marvin G. Celestial
Date: 10/26/2014 4:37:00 AM

Me and my students wrote them my friend. I made them an instant poets at once! LOL! I did a lecture - workshop how to tap their higher self and channel wisdom. They were successful! Another stunned them, they saw a ghost for the first time!

Jan Allison

Date: 8/14/2014 2:35:00 PM

fabulous sting of Haiku - I struggle writing one - these are simply stunning! Hugs jan xx

Marvin G. Celestial
Date: 8/14/2014 7:09:00 PM

Great Jan! Just do mental wandering and you will be stunned after! You will write your own string of HAIKUs...

Verlena S. Walker

Date: 8/10/2014 7:03:00 PM

Nicely done Marvin... You have a golden thumb with this form... Enjoyed... Verlena

Marvin G. Celestial
Date: 8/10/2014 7:23:00 PM

Thank you for the compliment Verlena! I hold a Mind Developement lecture on "Understanding Chakra." One of the topics was to tap the creative mind to write a poem. GREAT!