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Mystic Rain

The sky cries.. Shedding sprinkles of mystic rain.. A cascade of beauty upon a deep velvet sky.. I succumb to serenity.. As it whisks me away to stillness.. Oh mystic rain.. You brought forth much peace.. Peaceful interludes of joy soothes my soul.. Oh mystic rain.. Your sprinkles tapping lightly on my window.. The sound of tranquility erupts.. As I prepare myself into a deep blissful slumber.. Oh mystic rain.. Goodnight...

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Line Gauthier

Date: 2/11/2021 1:38:00 PM

A pleasure to find your charming poem published in the 2020 PS Anthology, Robertina~

Robertina B.
Date: 2/16/2021 4:32:00 PM

Greatly appreciate your kind words and visit, dear Line.. Thank you! Thrilled you enjoyed my poem.. Many blessings to you, my friend..

Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 5/11/2019 6:39:00 PM

Hello Robertina, the sound ofpouring rain is very tranquility to me. It makes me feel peaceful. Into a deep slumber. have a nice evening my friend.

Joseph May

Date: 4/3/2019 8:45:00 PM

A lullaby of raindrops..lovely write Robertina..

Vijay Pandit

Date: 4/1/2019 8:42:00 AM

I hear the soothing sounds in your poem..words of tranquility ..so well written, Robertina.

Bette Bavington

Date: 3/30/2019 11:33:00 PM

Rain is magnificent. It is peaceful as well as soothing. I love to go to sleep by it. Nicely done.

Robertina B.
Date: 3/31/2019 6:23:00 PM

Yes indeed Bette, I also enjoy sleeping by the sound of the rain.. Thank you for your kind words and visit.. Appreciate it! Blessings to you..

Line Gauthier

Date: 3/30/2019 9:37:00 PM

Wow - an awesome poem, Robertina. Lovely.

Robertina B.
Date: 3/31/2019 6:17:00 PM

Thank you for your lovely words and visit, Line.. Appreciate it! Blessings to you..

Caren Krutsinger

Date: 3/30/2019 9:18:00 PM

Robertina, this is tender and poetically beautiful!

Robertina B.
Date: 3/31/2019 6:15:00 PM

Thank you for such kind words , Caren.. I really appreciate it! Blessings to you..