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Mystery Untold

To her warmth of love, I don’t know when I got sold, She had heart-wrenching story, trusted what she told, I didn't realize her lies, she was brave and bold, With her deceptive smile, truth couldn't thrive to unfold. She tore away her promise, broke my heart of gold, Such a serene beauty, turned merciless and cold, In loneliness, shattered pieces of heart I hold, I never knew her secrets, why fake tears she rolled. In my mind's corner, memories echo though old, Her presence lingers on, while past I tried to fold, My thoughts keep wandering, I beseech them I scold, Secrets of her life, remain mystery untold. Jan 14, 2017. 12 by 12 Monorhyme - Poetry Contest Sponsored by: John Hamilton Any Poem Written In January 2017 - Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Laura Loo Feb 10, 2017.

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Date: 2/18/2017 12:16:00 PM
Not an easy monorhyme - nicely done Meenakshi! Congratulations! :-)
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Date: 2/11/2017 1:32:00 PM
wonderful rhythm Meenakshi...lovely poem, thank you and congrats :)-luloo
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Date: 1/29/2017 11:19:00 AM
Congratulations Meenakshi, so very well done...
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Meenakshi Raina
Date: 1/29/2017 11:30:00 AM
Thank you...
Date: 1/28/2017 7:48:00 PM
a sad one and very nicely done, Meenakshi, Congrats for your win.
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Meenakshi Raina
Date: 1/29/2017 11:31:00 AM
Thank you Andrea...
Date: 1/28/2017 4:32:00 PM
Congratulations on a top placement.
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Meenakshi Raina
Date: 1/29/2017 11:31:00 AM
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Date: 1/28/2017 4:15:00 PM
Great verse about betrayal and innocence Meenakshi! Congratulations :-)
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Meenakshi Raina
Date: 1/29/2017 11:32:00 AM
Thank you Mark...
Date: 1/28/2017 7:05:00 AM
Beautiful and sad. Congratulations on your win!
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Meenakshi Raina
Date: 1/29/2017 11:32:00 AM
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Date: 1/28/2017 6:43:00 AM
This is really an excellent monorhyme Meenakshi! It contains a depth of emotions that does not seem forced. It speaks to all who have loved someone and then been deceived by them. Outstanding work! Congratulations on your top win! 7 ; )
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Meenakshi Raina
Date: 1/29/2017 11:33:00 AM
Thank you Connie....
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Paulette Calasibetta
Date: 1/28/2017 7:06:00 AM
Connie, Thank You!!!!
Date: 1/28/2017 12:14:00 AM
Well done Meenakshi. Such a beautiful composition. :)
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Meenakshi Raina
Date: 1/29/2017 11:34:00 AM
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Date: 1/27/2017 11:17:00 PM
Hi Meenakshi, Congratulations on your 2nd place win. It was well deserved: -) Alexis
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Meenakshi Raina
Date: 1/29/2017 11:34:00 AM
Thank you Alexis...
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Paulette Calasibetta
Date: 1/28/2017 7:07:00 AM
Alexis, Thank you!!!
Date: 1/27/2017 8:45:00 PM
Well done congrats on a fine win!
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Meenakshi Raina
Date: 1/29/2017 11:35:00 AM
Thank you John...
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Paulette Calasibetta
Date: 1/28/2017 7:08:00 AM
Hi John, Thank You....it was fun to do, brought me where I love to be!!!
Date: 1/27/2017 7:08:00 PM
Congrats on your win!
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Meenakshi Raina
Date: 1/29/2017 11:36:00 AM
Thank you...

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