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Mystery of Clair De Lune

While the city rests under the velvet of skyline , I lie awake to trace a highway of clouds trailing against a lunar pageant, as evening shadows alter different time zones throughout the universe's frame-- while ambrosial rawness enters my pores from the fondle of this waxing red-ball. Oh Clair de Lune...there is something mysterious about your portrait of near midnight: amiable... dangerous, and carnal ; just ripe for my heart to listen as nocturnal larks trill a serenade-- each note ready to multiply into hundreds of minutes; that such orb's mystery remains unanswered by all creatures anticipating a new moon's rhapsody gradually simmering like your allured chant which flames upon lovers' clandestine rendezvous. For Craig Cornish: Claire De Lune Revised, new poem 8/7/2018

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Date: 8/18/2018 6:28:00 PM
A gorgeous winning poem Nette! Congratulations on your wonderful placement! : )
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Date: 8/18/2018 1:56:00 PM
Hi Dear Nette, there is nothing that you write that is average and this is no exception. There's always something to learn and enjoy within your thoughts.
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Date: 8/18/2018 7:29:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. Well done!
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Date: 8/17/2018 2:04:00 AM
Congratulations on your nice win, Nette.
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Date: 8/17/2018 1:37:00 AM
A lovely piece, nette, congrats! Viv x
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Date: 8/16/2018 7:46:00 PM
Your musical poetry always strikes a chord of the unusual.....the beautiful place that brilliantly holds mystery! What a lovely take on the contest, Nette! Congratulations ....you never fail to please the reader :)
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Date: 8/16/2018 6:28:00 PM
Lovely, nette. Congrats on your well deserved win.
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Date: 8/8/2018 12:23:00 PM
Wow! Your take on the 'Clair de Lune' is excellent, Nette! Surely inspired by the allure and beauty of a blushing moon, you combine passion, romance and mystery. In my eyes...a top winner. Hugs // paul
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Date: 8/8/2018 10:28:00 AM
Beautiful mysteries un-veiled, excellent entry Dear Nette...
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Date: 8/8/2018 8:03:00 AM
Truly wonderful and deep poetry, Nette:)
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Date: 8/7/2018 3:24:00 PM
Wow, One amazing entry in to craig's contest. A piece of truly poetic poetry.
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Date: 8/7/2018 12:52:00 AM
I am often at a loss for words, sometimes I just enjoy the flow and lines like a fine wine!
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Date: 8/6/2018 5:54:00 PM
The moon personified gives this brilliant work its own sultry story hands down. What an ending!
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Date: 8/6/2018 4:17:00 PM
Beautiful, scenic, passionate, romantic..all in one..well done, nette.
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