Mystery Box

Mystery Box

A gray morning made of concrete, bricks and clay
Where rain ceased, thin tributaries, stayed calm 
Final elements of wet, evaporated in the thin streams
Faded into small crevasses on the street 
Soundless on the emergent day

It was easy to see, above the road by the bridge
A faceless hard ground cracked by age
A green cube, sitting there, waiting 
At the functional spot, at the center of attention
With singular precise proportions sealed, a box in angular perfection

Buildings looked up with windows closed, in disdain, in disbelief
Refrained from making roof top speculations about the thing

Rivers too looked away from this location
Moved babbling rapidly on
Hid under bridges, under rocks, with every drop concealed
Then ran like fugitives over brooks, overlooked and flooded 
Avoided confrontation in the dark cornered waters
Hexahedrons could be contagious
So all things in nature moved away

Green box was out there all exposed in broad daylight 
Made of metal or something else or so it seemed
There were no openings for that matter
Just six sides residing
No proofs that it was solid like a block
No facts laid out that it was empty like lost souls 
Speculations indicated nothing but a box

Quiet fell around it like a hammer
Looking for a nail that was not there
Clearly, the cube that sat in plain view 
Had nothing better to do

To bring this matter to conclusion
It was avoided at all cost 
Box or not
This was its final stop
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Dietrich Avatar
September 28, 2014 at 11:48 AM
What interesting images in this one, Earl. the way you personify buildings and combine them with the rivers of nature. I enjoyed the creative lines in this one, such as quiet fell like a hammer looking for a nail. REally nice!
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September 28, 2014 at 3:32 PM
Hi Andrea, Thank you so much for your insightful observations on this poem. I have been shaping this box for about a week now. It finally came around, (figuratively speaking, since it can not be round.) to the 6 sided item that it is. Who would think that a simple box could be so controversial? Thanks again. I am happy that you enjoyed it. Have a great week end. Take care. Earl
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