Mystery

full moon is shining
    hiding behind black branches
                mystery unfolds

Heidi Sands

11/7/22

moonmysterynovemberhaiku

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Kim Rodrigues

Date: 11/14/2022 5:41:00 PM

Lovely imagery!

Heidi Sands
Date: 11/15/2022 4:48:00 AM

Thank you Kim. Just as I saw it! I appreciate your comments :)

Joe Dimino

Date: 11/12/2022 2:32:00 PM

Full light, or just peekaboo, the moon is never short on passionate mysteries. Lovely write!

Heidi Sands
Date: 11/13/2022 2:16:00 AM

It was playing peekaboo Joe. Thank you for your kind comment. :)

Harry Horsman

Date: 11/11/2022 7:14:00 PM

Yes we have just had a eclipse of the moon here, in Western Australia, Heidi. Your poem dwells well with the moment. Harry

Heidi Sands
Date: 11/12/2022 1:14:00 PM

Thank you Harry. I tried to see it recently , but missed it with timing and cloud cover. I appreciate your visit. I hope all is well :)

Mike Gentile

Date: 11/9/2022 4:55:00 AM

There is something so mysterious about the moon, especially as you have perfectly penned here Heidi!! Happy Wednesday xxoo

Heidi Sands
Date: 11/9/2022 5:34:00 AM

Yes there is Mike. Thank you for your visit and kind comment. Happy Wednesday :) xxoo

Vijay Pandit

Date: 11/8/2022 5:15:00 AM

Enjoy nature's wonders. Let the magic unfold.

Heidi Sands
Date: 11/8/2022 5:19:00 AM

I will Vijay. I hope you enjoy too. Thank you for your kind visit, my friend :)

Joseph May

Date: 11/7/2022 3:54:00 PM

A mystery waiting for the eclipse, Very nicely penned Heidi, hugs

Heidi Sands
Date: 11/7/2022 3:57:00 PM

Yes Joseph. Eclipse starts at 5:30 am. Enjoy. Thank you :) hugs

Mystery

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