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Myself, Armed Only With a Dying Flame

Myself, Armed Only With A Dying Flame Dark travels in such a long life early days of hungering strife A child born to fight for it tasting ton of salt in every spit Lost on pathways that breathe my aches Prod me restless as I sever the chase Between day and night and promises I made To myself, armed only with a dying flame Days sinking past like a slow tide no softness, that one could abide As years sent life into a dark spin easy came toughness, pain and sin I have seen more than I ever could Branches of bitterness carved deeply in wood Wandering eyes dismissed them as facades of a man Who fell victim to the ride as the years fell down Is there saving grace if I stop at none I may have foreseen it all but I doubted I’d come To terms with myself and make me turn around From the edge of this cliff and fade away void of sound Then came love trying its very best softness, weakness in every test Blade drawn to parry each thrust to live on never daring to trust Swiftly gone like a bygone air I may be nothing more than despair’s heir Constricted by premises that haunt every corner Shutting my eyes will mean absolute surrender A weak moment, hell bore on down life melted, each day a new frown Love had been accepted with grace she left without a path to trace Sad night , the fight no great cause clocks stopped, universe hit pause Time yielded no forgiving reprieve love lost, nothing , nothing to retrieve I was again left to remain I have but myself to blame When the rain comes to ease the pain I know I’ll be whispering your name 12-3-2014 Collaboration write, Robert Lindley and my very talented friend, Jake Ponce. Here is hoping that you may enjoy this humble team effort . Has been my great honor to write with my friend Jake!

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Date: 12/8/2014 1:53:00 PM
Robert, A most excellent collaborated write here with Jake Ponce. As with your other write I just read: "A Single Soul Cries Out," this one also has, for me, an almost "other worldly feel." The words, phrasing, and the imagery are all most exquisite. You and Jake did a most wonderful job with this poem. The refrain of the last stanza is indeed quite telling. A Super "7" and another one for my FAV file!! Best Always, Gary
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Date: 12/7/2014 5:10:00 PM
truly excellent colab well done the both of you beautifully penned piece
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Date: 12/6/2014 3:31:00 PM
And it's my honour to be reading this lovely poem that both of you contributed to, Robert and Jake. Two noteworthy lines that struck me being: "Shutting my eyes will mean absolute surrender", and "When the rain comes to ease the pain I know I’ll be whispering your name". #7 // paul
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Date: 12/6/2014 6:15:00 AM
Interesting collaboration..It seemed to flow together..Thanks for the visits to my page.Sara
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Date: 12/6/2014 1:57:00 AM
It's great to collaborate with a fellow poet. You two were so in sync with this write. It seems as though you shared the same memories. Thanks for sharing.
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Date: 12/5/2014 10:35:00 PM
Credit goes to my friend Jake. I wrote my part, he replied and we edited nothing. I saw the first draft and thought that's it--no need to edit. My talented poet friend agreed. His answering verses are fantastic and make the poem IMHO.
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Date: 12/5/2014 10:19:00 PM
A flow of words joined by two individuals turned out outstanding. Blessings Robert & Jake
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Date: 12/5/2014 7:54:00 AM
very sad and dark and poem you have two have penned. excellently written with a great flow to it.
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Date: 12/4/2014 3:20:00 AM
Amazing twosome and a superb write Robert and Jake!Rain coming to erase the pain as I will be whispering ur name,, my fav lines!
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Date: 12/4/2014 2:48:00 AM
Hoping everyone enjoys it too. I had a great time building my lines around Robert's. I couldn't have written anything without him opening the door into this piece's world.
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Date: 12/3/2014 9:02:00 PM
Fantastic, all the poem flows so well, but my absolute favorite line here is "I may be nothing more than despair’s heir" Amazing! Great write you two!
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Date: 12/3/2014 7:30:00 PM
Excellent collaboration Robert and Jake. Sometimes it's so hard to give our hearts completely.
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