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Myre's Mire - Horror Poetry

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A poem based on a dream I had, written some years ago and re-written over time for poetic expression.


 

Myre's Mire - Horror Poetry they wanted my eyes they wanted to see what I had seen they longed to see what I had seen to know how I laid bare my step on sugar path on foaming hill in raging twist against the wind to throw my stones across the land to walk, as I, deluded there was a house of wood and stone a sign outside its name, my dream and know not I why this I saw scratched in by nails fingers raw read 'Myre's Mire' bloodied within that house lived all the world lived everyone who'd ever lived breathed everyone who'd ever breathed and wait, they sat in harmony while I, outside dare not go in was I outside mistakenly? they wanted my eyes they wanted to see what I had seen and all the creatures they'd become could walk, as I, elated

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Date: 12/19/2023 3:01:00 PM
those types of dreams are so chilling and real. I love the parallel structure between the first verse and the last ( to walk as I deluded and could walk, as I, elated.) That structure was brilliant! I enjoyed the story as well. Excellent, Clive! have a great evening, Sara
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Clive Culverhouse
Date: 12/19/2023 11:24:00 PM
Glad you appreciated the structure of my poem, thanks for reading Sara
Date: 12/19/2023 11:04:00 AM
This is so well written and so poetic. And a very intriguing dream you’ve written about. Sometimes they say dreams are better than reality but some dreams make us realize reality is way more better. I love the concept and cadence of this. Pleasure reading this.
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Clive Culverhouse
Date: 12/19/2023 11:22:00 PM
Thanks for your time IE

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