Myalup

one day working
the frets
i discovered the song

and I played
it over and over
hoping she would

hear it in her distant
land where she
had sea and beach

long bush tracks
and a bike for
the lake’s perimeter

i dream that she
will hear it
still on an evening

sky and a darkly
hidden verandah
breathing my fingers’

lilting on my buzzing
sunburst axe  and
love’s discordant harmony

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011



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Date: 8/3/2011 8:08:00 AM
Congratulations on making the first round Alistar. Good luck.
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Date: 8/2/2011 9:56:00 AM
Congratulations on your poetry making it through round one in the PoetrySoup International Poetry contest Alistair. I wish you the best in the final round. Love, Carol
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Date: 6/1/2011 3:42:00 PM
Thank you, Carol and Dr Mehta, for your congratulations :) I am totally chuffed about being featured :)
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Date: 5/31/2011 7:29:00 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved feature this week Alistair. Love, Carol
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Date: 5/30/2011 6:27:00 PM
Congratulations on your poem being featured this week, Alistair
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