My Wrists

A story is told Just by the look of it You see it starts to unfold It's hard to take in just a bit So many memories I take them all with me I pull at my sleeves So that no one see I don't want to hurt anyone Even when they've hurt me I'm fragile Yet they still break me

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Ivy Vresk

Date: 12/24/2013 8:23:00 AM

May Christmas brings you blessings in every aspect of your life dear Hope.and congrats on your first poem here. Love Ismeta -Ivy

Skat A

Date: 12/17/2013 10:58:00 PM

Hope, Your first poem on the soup is excellent for the readers!! Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. Wishing you the best when it comes to your poems. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here. Starting with me. SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you like. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND". Hugs* SKAT

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 12/17/2013 6:18:00 PM

hello, Hope thid cuts really deep. . , A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. Dropping by to invite you to my latest contest. You will find the contest page on the top left hand side* -Looking forward in following and reading your poetry. Hope to hear from you soon. You will enjoy the community, we are one big happy family. (Drama & Love. LOL) ~ Take Care!! From: your new poet friend @-> LINDA <-@

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 12/17/2013 1:42:00 PM

- Welcome to P-Soup, H.D. ! - Nice to read your first poem here.:)) - Hope you will have much pleasure to be with us. - Wishing you good luck - have a nice day! - (Comment on the poetry of others and they will comment on yours). - My first greeting to you from Norway. - I will come back to read more.... another day :) - oxox / /Anne-Lise :)