My Wound

I can't believe he is doing this to me
I feel like loosing him too 
telling me he is going to sleep
but after an hour he is online
or maybe he didn't quit
I see his last seen when I wake up

Yes! he is lying me
doesn't he?
I feel like loosing and bleeding that wound again
yes! the one I had long time ago
while I was pushing so hard my self to satisfy my half
I can't handle this anymore
sleepless, headache, migraine again I begin today

What haven't I done?
am I gaming or am a game?
the second one I think
when I give my, so hard to win
but can't understand what's going on
just to learn the lesson
I feel like betrayed 

I never learn, b'coz I have much love
and empty hatless 
I had born to satisfy the comings
but I sure forget me
I see them coming and leaving
I try to support, but I much open  my wound

Whatever happens, know this!
as always am not regretting 
"am just trying".

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016



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Date: 9/1/2016 12:22:00 PM
well penned Alice, so true indeed modern technology has a lot to answer for! have blessed day, Gordon
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Alice Uwihoreye
Date: 9/1/2016 6:08:00 PM
thank you Gordon, be blessed.
Date: 9/1/2016 9:52:00 AM
I'm so tired of being forsaken.. I love u Alice. Please trust in me. If you can't believe in me..then what hope does the world have!
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Alice Uwihoreye
Date: 9/1/2016 6:11:00 PM
OoOh Justin, the world is so, am sorry.
Date: 9/1/2016 9:42:00 AM
Love.. I was just reading over hay we talked about last night because I couldn't sleep and missed u!!don't think like that!!! I love you always. U were the one that was with me so long ago!!! Remember!!!MARY I love u tooooo much
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Alice Uwihoreye
Date: 9/1/2016 6:06:00 PM
MARY??
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Justin Worthy
Date: 9/1/2016 9:42:00 AM
That*
Date: 9/1/2016 3:05:00 AM
The Internet has changed the whole world overnight...And, unfortunately, not always for the best. The development and interaction of human relationships will never be the same again; how ironical that the very medium that could well have saved mankind collectively...May isolate us all as individuals so divisively! My best regards, Alice. :) john
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Alice Uwihoreye
Date: 9/1/2016 3:40:00 AM
Thanks for the comment John, unfortunately that's what we are living in. :(
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