My Worst Poem Ever...My Frog Is Dead

Here I sit broken hearted 
Because my frog has departed 
It isn't as if he was a prince 
But a better frog I've not seen since 
He went to jump on a lily pad 
Oh, his eyesight was really bad 
On a rock he landed, his neck he broke 
wouldn't you know it, then he croaked.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010



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Date: 11/26/2010 11:04:00 PM
HAHA they got necks? Congrats ribbit!
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Date: 11/23/2010 6:22:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in PD'S contest Paula. Love, Carol
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Date: 11/22/2010 4:14:00 PM
Congratulations on your win in this fine contest..Sara
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Date: 11/21/2010 2:39:00 PM
Paula, this is actually quite comical. I honestly love its humor!! Anyway congratulations in the contest!!
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Date: 11/21/2010 12:45:00 PM
Congratulations on this well deserved win, Paula
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Date: 11/21/2010 12:09:00 PM
Hey Paula congrats on your big win in P.D.'s contest worst poem ever written.. though all your poetry touches me deeply luv.. so how can it be worst? am so happy to be sharing this placement with u my friend.. enjoy another sweet victory luv..
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Date: 11/21/2010 10:53:00 AM
Paula...congrats on big win.......... Luv/Best wishes.......Hitendra Mehta
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Date: 11/21/2010 9:23:00 AM
Okay! I had to laugh and think,,, why would someone make a sad poem for a frog,,, lol,, , Congratulations, Had lots of fun with this contest,, have a nice and wonderful day,..p.d.
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Date: 11/21/2010 9:21:00 AM
The poor frog! Congratulations on your win Paula in Pd's contest ;)
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