My World's In a Whirl

Hmm! Methinks I've just hit a wall A damn rare occurrence for me Not worried even a little bit though My thoughts will soon be set free Must be ready to go with the flow And not think the well has run dry A momentary wee glitch in the action Best not to try to figure out why Still can't help trembling just a little bit While sipping my morning wine What if I was to never write again The world would fall out of rhyme Oh heavenly days, my mind's in a whirl Think I'll talk about the birds and bees Should I stand up to my nervous feelings Or just let everything flow free? Okay, think I've got a grasp on things As I stagger aimlessly around Always thought of myself as prolific Back to the keyboard I'm bound Mac popped up with, “Hello stranger” Not a way to get back on stream Insensitive and unfeeling, this Mac of mine Computers can be so damn mean! © Jack Ellison 2013
Wrote this before my recent uncontrollable avalanche of poems!!! LOL

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013



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Date: 9/18/2013 10:32:00 AM
Dragon and I couldn't see a brain freeze, 3 poems again today. Nope, No writters block either! They all liked you saying to let everything flow free... So they ran off to acorn falls, Just past Troll Lake Dam.... First the penguins, then every body else joined in... They're going over the falls!... and having a ball!... Really! But don't worry ... They'll be back shortly so I can read your other 2 poems... to them... Kids! and all that energy... WOW! For us the flow is more in brain power... LOL
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