My World

Some nights 
I ascend into a world where only I reside. 
Gorgeous sights,
Vibrant colors,
This might just be my paradise.

I run free. 
No worries, 
No queries,
No fears.
My mind feels forever clear. 

A place where I embrace the wind on my face 
And the chill of the breeze
As I fly pass the beautiful palm trees. 

The sense of freedom manifests my body. 
I believe no one can stop me. 
No one can soar as smooth or gracefully.
This is my kingdom,
A sanctuary where I can truly be original.

Light as a feather.
No stormy or bad weather.
Just the peaceful rays of a sunny day. 

I descend back to the delicate earth.
Lay in the field of green, 
Feeling the soft grass on my back. 
Taking in all of splendor that 
Radiates from this world I have built for myself.

I close my eyes, 
And then hesitation surfaces. 
When they open, 
I am back into the actuality of the universe we all know, 
Reality.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010



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Date: 10/3/2010 8:36:00 PM
such wonderful words my friend [duncan]
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Date: 9/30/2010 11:01:00 AM
What an outstanding way to enjoy a day. I am so happy to be able to read the excellent poetry here at PoetrySoup today. Hope you are enjoying your day and finding much inspiration along the way Lauren. Love, Carol
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Date: 9/30/2010 6:02:00 AM
A nice sanctuary you have created with equally nice display of images, Lauren.
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Date: 9/30/2010 2:19:00 AM
As well into your sanctuary let me sink... As well into splendor let me dream... Nice work!
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Date: 9/29/2010 11:31:00 PM
Hi Lauren..I love this..why dont you call if Free Verse..I think it fits in that catagory.. BG
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