Ann Gilmour Poet Shape

My Wish Indeed

 
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There 
is a kind of magic
I can feel it in the air
A sprinkling  ~  A sparkling
A shimmering feeling everywhere
Of joyous anticipation a time for celebration
Though my wish indeed ‘tis for our World in need 
******Of human love and kindness******
***A child was born give thanks above***
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Step back a while and breathe
For love is all we really need



Written 4th December 2021

Premier Contest 'Winter Wishes '
Sponsor Chantelle Anne Cooke
6th PLACE

Contest A STRAND (1045)
Sponsor Brian Strand
FIRST PLACE

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Ann Peck January 6, 2022 at 10:54 AM A lovely poem, Ann~especially your last two lines. So true. Congratulations on your big win! Ann Gilmour February 9, 2022 at 12:14 AM Thank you so much Ann with kindest thoughts Ann xx

Christuraj Alex January 4, 2022 at 9:31 PM " love is all we really need" - Great. Beautifully written. Congratulations! Ann Gilmour January 5, 2022 at 11:59 AM Oh bless you dear Christuraj and thank you. With kindest thoughts Ann xx

Paula Goldsmith January 4, 2022 at 11:32 AM Congratulations on your win. What a creative shape and write. "Love It" Have a blessed day and New Year.................. Ann Gilmour January 5, 2022 at 11:58 AM Many thanks dear Paula ~ I am delighted that you "love it" such a compliment. Wishing you a Happy New Year my friend. With kindest thoughts Ann xx

Panagiota Romios December 23, 2021 at 3:18 PM Congratson winning Ann. A perfect write Pangie Jolly Holiday Wishes Ann Gilmour December 28, 2021 at 8:14 AM Thank you dearest Panagiota for your kind words ~ hugs Ann xx

Connie Marcum Wong December 23, 2021 at 12:13 PM BEAUTIFUL Ann. I love your words and the shape and especially it’s message. Congratulations on your wonderful win. Have a joyous Christmas my friend. Blessings xxoo Ann Gilmour December 23, 2021 at 2:35 PM Bless you dearest Connie with kindest thoughts Ann xx

Sam Kauffman December 15, 2021 at 12:35 PM Ann, love your "sprinkling," "sparkling," "shimmering" wishes! The shape, with snowflake stars, really enhances both the mood and the texture of your delightful penning! Congratulations! Sending you sparkling - shimmering - blessings for Christmas. Ann Gilmour December 23, 2021 at 2:36 PM Thanking you dearest Sam with kindest thoughts Ann xx

Beata Agustin December 15, 2021 at 1:12 AM Wow! Congrats! Thanks for sharing this. A blessed Christmas to you and your family. God bless you. Ann Gilmour December 23, 2021 at 2:37 PM With many thanks dear Beata with kindest thoughts Ann xx

Christuraj Alex December 14, 2021 at 10:38 PM A great design-filled writing. Congratulations! Ann Gilmour December 23, 2021 at 2:38 PM Thank you dear Christuraj with kindest thoughts Ann xx

Susan Ashley December 14, 2021 at 8:56 PM Dear Ann, I admire the shape of your poem and adore the beautiful message of love conveyed within, expressed with a generous sprinkling of poetic magic, the shimmer of joy and the sparkle of internal rhymes. Splendid! Congratulations for your excellent win in Chantelle’s contest. Warmest wishes, my friend.. ~Susan Ann Gilmour December 23, 2021 at 2:39 PM Bless you dear Susan with kindest thoughts Ann xx

Jan Allison December 14, 2021 at 3:50 PM a joy to see and read!!! many congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx Ann Gilmour December 23, 2021 at 2:40 PM Awww thank you dear Jan with kindest thoughts Ann xx

Andrea Dietrich December 14, 2021 at 3:47 PM What an awesome entry. BIG congrats. The shape made with your words is wonderful. Ann Gilmour December 23, 2021 at 2:41 PM Bless you dear Andrea with kindest thoughts Ann xx

P.S. Awtry December 14, 2021 at 2:29 PM Ann, wow! A piece of art, visually and poetically! Especially liked, "A sprinkling ~ A sparkling A shimmering feeling everywhere"--Congratulations! ~ps Ann Gilmour December 23, 2021 at 2:50 PM Thank you dear PS with kindest thoughts Ann xx

Constance La France December 14, 2021 at 1:15 PM Ann, beautiful and very creative. Congratulations on your win in Chantelle's Winter Wishes contest ~ love and serenity _Constance Ann Gilmour December 23, 2021 at 2:46 PM Thank you dear Constance with kindest thoughts Ann xx

Edward Ebbs December 14, 2021 at 12:46 PM So True, Amen…Congrats! Ed Ann Gilmour December 23, 2021 at 2:49 PM Many thanks Edward with kindest thoughts Ann xx

Paula Goldsmith December 14, 2021 at 10:29 AM WOW!! Congratulations on your win. I love the write and shape. I love your line "For love is all we really need." So very true. Have a blessed day................... Ann Gilmour December 23, 2021 at 2:34 PM Thank you dear Paula with kindest thoughts Ann xx

Paulette Calasibetta December 10, 2021 at 4:03 PM How delightful! I love your message of love! Good luck in the contest, I think it's a winner. Blessings, Paulette Ann Gilmour December 23, 2021 at 2:33 PM Bless you dear Paulette, with kindest thoughts Ann xx

Victor Buhagiar December 4, 2021 at 2:25 AM A beautiful poem and so well arranged. Ann Gilmour December 23, 2021 at 2:32 PM Thank you so much dear Victor, with kindest thoughts Ann xx