My Winter

I remember one night last winter when we thought it was snow falling, but we were wrong. It was ice.

We went out that night and stayed out too late -- unusual for folks our age. We got caught in the ice storm and had to navigate home on streets made of glass.

Driving home those few short miles from St Paul to Minneapolis was so very scary. How could such a short distance become so incredibly long? How could staying out late go so terribly wrong? 

We planned the most constant route home as we skated to our parking place.  Multiple accidents dotted the street and dread filled my heart as I climbed behind the steering wheel, envisioning us sliding down some hill into a car or tree. 

“I will not take the freeway!” I exclaimed as I eased the car from its moor, intent on what seemed a very distant shore. Wheels spinning, tires sliding, silently screaming, I eased ahead gingerly as vehicles all around us seemed to be loosing their way.

Cars slip sideways into ditches, up on curbs and into each other. One car slithered past us as we inched slowly down an inclined avenue. Please God, Please God, my silent chant  . . . at stoplights and curves, with white-knuckled grasp upon the steering wheel, I steered through like filling a narrow edge with a stick of glue.

My spouse, the navigator, said “Turn here and take this other route.”  I prayed we’d make it home. We saw a bus slide toward us sideways down the street as we approached the intersection. It seemed like a dinosaur run amok, landing sideways at our corner with a gentle buck. My light turned green and we eased forward, leaving the saurischian behind.

Hoping there would be no cars and that we’d be all alone on the city streets. 
“Please God, help us make it home. Don’t let anyone or thing meet or greet us.”

At final last, the garage insight, I prayed that I could get into that tight spot without crunching the parked truck inside or the garage as I skated in. Stopped and safe finally, I realized I had held my breath since we began. My teeth hurt from clenching them so hard. And I prayed Thanks to God! I’m glad to have you navigate the treacherous roads of my life.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017



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Date: 12/16/2017 12:42:00 PM
Never a fun drive on ice. Well done Annette...
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Annette Gagliardi
Date: 12/19/2017 9:20:00 PM
Hi Charlie, Thanks for the comment. Least I know someone reads these poems.
Date: 11/29/2017 10:45:00 AM
Congrats on your placement in my contest, and thanks for entering. I enjoyed the read. Viv x
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Date: 12/19/2017 9:19:00 PM
Thank you for the placement and for running the contest.
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