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My Winter

What is the howling wind outside Compared to the scars I hide? What point is the coldest season When my heart has been wronged by treason? The whitest snow or the darkest night Cannot erase the betraying sight Of you, my dearest Lover, In the arms of another. As I lay down on the ground I know I will never be found. The love I had and lost Is too high a cost. Frigid fingers caress my skin, As I surrender the hurt within. I feel Frost’s breath on my face As coldness seeps into every place. The snowflakes falling down Will softly in my tears drown. My world turns to grey As I give my last breath away.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017




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Date: 12/23/2017 9:16:00 AM
I can see why this on is a winner. Congrats and Merry Christmas.
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Date: 1/10/2018 5:04:00 AM
Thank you Richard!!! :-D
Date: 12/15/2017 9:21:00 PM
A sincere congrats on your well-deserved win, Jane - blessings to you, friend! :-)
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Date: 1/10/2018 5:04:00 AM
Thank you! ;-)
Date: 12/1/2017 7:18:00 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved win Jane, so well written great theme, flow and rhyme. :))
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Date: 12/4/2017 3:37:00 AM
Thank you very much! I appreciate your feedback!
Date: 11/29/2017 3:10:00 PM
Emotional painful imagery,Jane, congratulations on your write. Hugs Eve ~`*
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Date: 12/1/2017 2:36:00 AM
Thank you! x
Date: 11/29/2017 12:50:00 PM
Just Jane, wow! CONGRATULATIONS on your win !
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Date: 12/1/2017 2:35:00 AM
Thank you!
Date: 11/29/2017 6:37:00 AM
Congratulations on your win Jane, a sad hush settles within the words of this piece, so well crafted. :) xomo!
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Date: 11/29/2017 7:03:00 AM
Thank you!!! I do so appreciate it!
Date: 11/29/2017 2:11:00 AM
Congrats on your 2nd in my contest, Jane, well done! Viv x
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Date: 11/29/2017 7:01:00 AM
Wow, Thank you very much, I do appreciate it!!
Date: 11/28/2017 7:18:00 AM
Love the first line, backed up with an interesting story, enjoyed.
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Date: 11/29/2017 1:06:00 AM
Thank you! I appreciate your feedback!

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