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My Winter

Come winter foggy n frosty mornings greet you Cold breeze hikes the chill Sun lifts the fog n sucks the dew But some beings the chill does kill Mustard fields greet everywhere Their sight fills you with great joy Gloominess vanishes in the air seeing their crop farmers exclaim 'oh boy' kite fliers appear on roof tops Their hoots abound in the air Sweets n nuts appear in shops You see bright colours people wear People bask in sun during day Around the bonfire they sit at night Chill is better than sweating in May If its extremely cold there are ways to fight.

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Date: 12/15/2017 10:01:00 PM
A sincere congrats on your well-deserved win, Bawa - blessings to you, friend! :-)
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Date: 12/3/2017 7:28:00 AM
Congratulations, Bawa on your placement.
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Date: 11/29/2017 3:11:00 AM
congrats on your placement in my contest with this lovely poem, Bawa, well done! Regards, Viv
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Bawa Talwar
Date: 11/29/2017 11:45:00 PM
Thank you for your encouragement n I wanted to point out that this all happens in north India .
Date: 11/20/2017 1:15:00 AM
Beautiful poetry of life and nature ... I agree fully to what you have said in the whole poem ... Very nice ....
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Bawa Talwar
Date: 11/20/2017 6:19:00 AM
Thank you for the encouragement !

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