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Contest : April National Poetry Month

Sponsored by : Daniel Henry Rodgers

My Winter

You entered my room a long time ago
across the dry landscape of many summers 
now when this winter looms over the trees 
shedding the wilted leaves 
you are by the closed window
leaning on the cold wall 
and I am by the fireplace 
your eyes on the cracking wood on fire 
mine on the frosted window pane
freezing my mental agony.

Have you ever wondered 
why my voice doesn’t reach you
the words crash on the wall 
and fall silent, that’s why
have you ever wondered 
why my warmth doesn’t touch you 
the feelings brush the window pane 
and congeal inert, that’s why 
have you ever wondered why 
my eyes don’t look into yours 
the vision is stuck on the bare trees outside 
and waits for the spring, that’s why 
have you ever wondered why 
my hands can’t hold yours 
the reach is lost in desolate time 
and breaks separated, that’s why. 

I have wondered if I could break the cold wall 
shatter the iced window pane 
make the trees green again 
would my voice rise from the dust 
would the warmth of my mind melt the ice
and my eyes bring the colors of spring in yours, 
would the flow of time stop 
stop to create the stretching distance 
and I could hold your hands again.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2020

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Ashley Avatar
August 16, 2025 at 1:29 PM
Dear Subimal, congratulations for your success in Mark's contest with your powerful poignant poem. Wow! Just so achingly beautiful! Exquisite pain expressed so ruefully. It's a honor to share the podium with you, my poet friend. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan
Sinha-Roy Avatar
August 16, 2025 at 7:55 PM
Thank you so much, Susan.
Toney Avatar
August 10, 2025 at 2:53 PM
Subimal, a very thought-provoking poem about emotional distance. Your use of metaphor is brilliant. Congratulations on your top-10 finish on Mile 5 of my 2025 Poetry Marathon Contest. Keep your running shoes on, since Mile 6 has already started. You can find your overall standing in my Mile 5 blog post.
Sinha-Roy Avatar
August 16, 2025 at 7:55 PM
Thank you, Toney for the placement.
Delaney Avatar
December 6, 2023 at 1:18 PM
A very effective treatment on estrangement. Roy: Congratson your showcase placement. A new FAV for me. SuZ
Sinha-Roy Avatar
December 7, 2023 at 9:22 PM
Thank you so much, Suzanne.
One Avatar
December 6, 2023 at 6:51 AM
You have so many poems, it must have been difficult for you to choose one, especially as you do so well in contest.. this is a lovely poem, you do romance well.. I hope the distance did end.. Congratulations on having your poem showcased..
Sinha-Roy Avatar
December 6, 2023 at 7:07 AM
Yes indeed, it was difficult, but ultimately chose one of the older ones and the one I thought you would like to read. Thank you for its placement.
Marcum Wong Avatar
February 25, 2022 at 8:56 PM
A winter love poem that sings Subimal. I see it is in the PS book and that makes me happy. Congratulations on this romantic and lovely poem winning first place. Blessings xxoo
Ray Choudhury Avatar
February 25, 2022 at 5:07 PM
Congratulations on your win. Amazing lines and images! BW ~ Mala
Gauthier Avatar
January 16, 2021 at 10:56 AM
Subimal, I am so happy to see this powerful poem published in the 2020 PS Anthology. I'm sure I have already FAVE'd it. It just gives me the shivers ~ beautifully penned. Congrats again!
Carber Avatar
November 25, 2020 at 11:02 AM
Congrats--a very powerful final stanza!
Ray Choudhury Avatar
November 24, 2020 at 5:51 PM
Congratulations, Subimal. All your poems are so touching - love this one. To my faves.
Strand Avatar
November 24, 2020 at 4:26 AM
Subimal,f you would like to soupmail a link thereto I'll add it to the thank you blog to Line
La France Avatar
November 24, 2020 at 3:41 AM
Subimal, congratulations in Line's, Have You Published contest with this beautiful poem, each line, each word is amazing _Constance
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