My Winter

You entered my room a long time ago
across the dry landscape of many summers 
now when this winter looms over the trees 
shedding the wilted leaves 
you are by the closed window
leaning on the cold wall 
and I am by the fireplace 
your eyes on the cracking wood on fire 
mine on the frosted window pane. 

Have you ever wondered 
why my voice doesn’t reach you
the words crash on the wall 
and fall silent, that’s why
have you ever wondered 
why my warmth doesn’t touch you 
the feelings brush the window pane 
and freeze inert, that’s why 
have you ever wondered why 
my eyes don’t look into yours 
the vision is stuck on the bare trees outside 
and waits for the spring, that’s why 
have you ever wondered why 
my hands can’t hold yours 
the reach is lost in desolate time 
and breaks separated, that’s why. 

I have wondered if I could break the cold wall 
shatter the iced window pane 
make the trees green again 
would my voice rise from the dust 
would the warmth of my mind melt the ice
and my eyes bring the colors of spring in yours, 
would the flow of time stop 
stop to create the stretching distance 
and I could hold your hands again.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2020


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Date: 8/16/2025 1:29:00 PM
Dear Subimal, congratulations for your success in Mark's contest with your powerful poignant poem. Wow! Just so achingly beautiful! Exquisite pain expressed so ruefully. It's a honor to share the podium with you, my poet friend. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan
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Subimal Sinha-Roy
Date: 8/16/2025 7:55:00 PM
Thank you so much, Susan.
Date: 8/10/2025 2:53:00 PM
Subimal, a very thought-provoking poem about emotional distance. Your use of metaphor is brilliant. Congratulations on your top-10 finish on Mile 5 of my 2025 Poetry Marathon Contest. Keep your running shoes on, since Mile 6 has already started. You can find your overall standing in my Mile 5 blog post.
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Date: 8/16/2025 7:55:00 PM
Thank you, Toney for the placement.
Date: 12/6/2023 1:18:00 PM
A very effective treatment on estrangement. Roy: Congratson your showcase placement. A new FAV for me. SuZ
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Subimal Sinha-Roy
Date: 12/7/2023 9:22:00 PM
Thank you so much, Suzanne.
Date: 12/6/2023 6:51:00 AM
You have so many poems, it must have been difficult for you to choose one, especially as you do so well in contest.. this is a lovely poem, you do romance well.. I hope the distance did end.. Congratulations on having your poem showcased..
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Date: 12/6/2023 7:07:00 AM
Yes indeed, it was difficult, but ultimately chose one of the older ones and the one I thought you would like to read. Thank you for its placement.
Date: 2/25/2022 8:56:00 PM
A winter love poem that sings Subimal. I see it is in the PS book and that makes me happy. Congratulations on this romantic and lovely poem winning first place. Blessings xxoo
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Date: 2/25/2022 5:07:00 PM
Congratulations on your win. Amazing lines and images! BW ~ Mala
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Date: 1/16/2021 10:56:00 AM
Subimal, I am so happy to see this powerful poem published in the 2020 PS Anthology. I'm sure I have already FAVE'd it. It just gives me the shivers ~ beautifully penned. Congrats again!
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Date: 11/25/2020 11:02:00 AM
Congrats--a very powerful final stanza!
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Date: 11/24/2020 5:51:00 PM
Congratulations, Subimal. All your poems are so touching - love this one. To my faves.
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Date: 11/24/2020 4:26:00 AM
Subimal,f you would like to soupmail a link thereto I'll add it to the thank you blog to Line
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Date: 11/24/2020 3:41:00 AM
Subimal, congratulations in Line's, Have You Published contest with this beautiful poem, each line, each word is amazing _Constance
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